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Serenity

Brotherhood of rocks beneath slumbering pillars chirping their mute song

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/11/2010 11:46:00 AM

Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round of the Poetrysoup site contest Oluwaseun. The best to you in the finals. Love, Carol

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/25/2010 11:57:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved poem being picked to be featured this week Oluwaseun. Love, Carol

Nadia Shahwan

Date: 9/28/2009 6:21:00 AM

Pretty good peom. You know? Singing melodious psalms are no longer heard from underneath rocky pillars but are sung courageously in the christian world from the bottom of blissful hearts. Mute song however does not chirp but get choked due to lack of democracy. Pls re-entry as: BROTHERHOOD OF SONGS.. BENEATH ENCHANTING PILLARS.. CHIRP ANGELIC SONGS. Am looking to read more of your poems. All the best.

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 9/28/2009 6:03:00 AM

wow unique idea chirping rocks! when they scrap it does sound like music! Light & Love