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Serengeti King

stealthily stalking grasses of gold disguise him.... serengeti king streaks of black and white pounding out panic's pursuit.... dusty clouds of fear weaklings fall away struggle vainly to survive.... nature roars aloud

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Kash Poet

Date: 3/1/2011 6:05:00 AM

Congrats deb on your well deserved win with this beautiful Haiku---kashinath

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/28/2011 8:45:00 PM

Congratulations on your win, Deb! An animal I don't know too much about, but you sure give some nice description.

Francine Roberts

Date: 2/28/2011 8:23:00 PM

love it, powerful haiku, congrats on your win in the contest

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/28/2011 5:45:00 PM

Very descriptive work..Congrats..Sara

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 2/28/2011 1:05:00 PM

Congratulations on the second place win in the contest of carol, deb

Sharon Ruebel

Date: 2/28/2011 10:31:00 AM

Hello Debbie, Congratulations on your well deserved win in the contest with this beautiful entry As Always, Shar

John Freeman

Date: 2/28/2011 10:15:00 AM

Good to see you poem at the top Deb, beautiful job. Congratulations on your poem's honored second place recognition.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/28/2011 7:21:00 AM

Congrats Deb on your second place win in Carol's contest with this elegant entry my friend.. enjoy another grand victory with luv..

Tahera Mannan

Date: 2/28/2011 7:05:00 AM

nature roars aloud indeed. wow.Many congratulations for this win.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 2/28/2011 6:13:00 AM

Congratulations on your very deserving win in my contest Deb. This was a hard contest for me to judge. Thank you for supporting my contest another will begin soon. Love, Carol