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September

Autumn bites the air sharpening a September morning. Fields of wrapped summers lie in rolls of harvested hay. Berries bruise tart hedgerows their sprinting thorns startle a dandelion sun. Thistle heads tuft purple tossing seeds into a fleece breeze. A patchwork of seasoned meadows sleep beneath cauliflower clouds. Castle ruins crumble among sheep cotton fields on a hearty harvest noon.

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Date: 9/21/2011 9:06:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Brian's sponsored contest Eiken. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/18/2011 9:47:00 AM
CONGRATS EIKEN ON FIRST PLACE WIN LUV..
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Date: 9/18/2011 4:00:00 AM
Oh My, I did not know I had come anywhere in this contest, thank you everyone and Brian especially for the joy of entering such a great topic. September is a bountiful time of year, Happy Autumn everyone:))))
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Date: 9/17/2011 7:54:00 PM
Beautiful write!!! Congratulations on your well deserving win!!!!------Lori
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Date: 9/18/2011 4:01:00 AM
Lori, many thanks, so happy.:))
Date: 9/17/2011 12:37:00 PM
Eiken, Beautiful Free Verse. a superb win, worthy of the glory. Congratulations. Agape, Moses
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Date: 9/18/2011 4:01:00 AM
John, many thanks. I have not been here a while, it is wonderful to get a glory:)) thank you. x
Date: 9/17/2011 12:04:00 PM
Really great descriptions. Very visual. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 9/17/2011 9:56:00 AM
The first time Ive had the pleasure of reading your work..this paints such a lovely picture. Well done and congrats. BG
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Date: 9/17/2011 8:47:00 AM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of Brian, Eiken
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Date: 9/14/2011 5:01:00 PM
Steven and Laura, thank you so much for your comments. I have been away from the site for a while. It is nice to be back.
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Date: 9/14/2011 9:39:00 AM
Eiken~ Ah a very nice feel to this poem its as if I were standing right there! I really enjoyed this one! Laura :)
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Date: 9/14/2011 8:59:00 AM
lovely descriptions here, excellent write and uplifting poetry
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