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"September, beautiful month of my birth, is nigh, but I cannot feel glad." September, drifting in with glow of moon, you stifle Summer’s ardor. . . and she grieves. In guise of fire, the Fall comes all too soon. Your breath grows cool. You’ll blow and loosen leaves. The hills and woodlands will reflect new hues. You stifle Summer’s ardor. . . and she grieves. In Autumn’s chill, the colors are a ruse. For as you pass, the trees are set ablaze. The hills and woodlands then reflect new hues. Though warmth may linger through your final days, old Sun is waning, yet he still seems strong! For as you pass, the trees are set ablaze. September, you’re a melancholy song. Though time be short, you paint a brilliant dusk! Old sun is waning, yet he still seems strong. October looms. . . Your ending will be brusque. September, drifting in with glow of moon, though time be short, you paint a brilliant dusk. In guise of fire, the Fall comes all too soon.
by Andrea Dietrich For the contest of Constance La France ~ A Rambling Poet ~ "A Poem, Please"

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  1. Date: 1/14/2015 12:07:00 PM
    What a treasure! I love how you personified summer. I can feel her angst over her loss. The visuals that you create with the line "trees set ablaze" brilliantly paints the picture of September.

  1. Date: 12/3/2014 8:37:00 PM
    how did I miss this sparkling gem Andrea you excel with this delightful write hugs 7 + fav

  1. Date: 11/30/2014 11:18:00 AM
    Enjoyed this one!!!!Very Nice!!!

  1. Date: 11/29/2014 4:53:00 AM
    I am blown away by the magic of this poem. Fantastic imagery Andrea an exceptional write by a top class poet love it. A FAV hugs

  1. Date: 8/29/2014 5:09:00 PM
    Andrea, thanks for supporting my one WORD title contest. Enjoy the win. ~SKAT~

  1. Date: 7/17/2014 8:41:00 AM
    Andrea What a wonderful and beautiful ode to September and the season. You captured it's essence so perfectly. Thank you for the fun and nice comment on my Secret poem.

  1. Date: 6/4/2014 12:31:00 PM
    Congratulations on the win with such a BEAUTIFUL write, Andrea... I love this one so much! ... Arlene

  1. Date: 5/13/2014 5:58:00 PM
    what a super write Andrea so well captured is this month my kind of poetry love it and ty so much for placing me in your contest hugs

  1. Date: 4/19/2014 1:41:00 PM
    Hi Andria. This was a very enjoyable and calming read. Thanks for sharing your poets heart, soul and mind with us. Keep up the great work. Regards, Earl

  1. Date: 3/30/2014 1:50:00 PM
    Andrea, speachless! ~~~My favorite line~~ For as you pass, the trees are set ablaze. Andrea, Andrea, your pen is LOADED! I'm glad I stopped by.

  1. Date: 3/23/2014 3:48:00 PM
    You know I've seen that "Best Poems" link before, but never thought about it. Just one more nice little service. Excellent poem, gets me to thinking that you need to move to this hemisphere, where September is Spring, and the world is waking to the sun.

  1. Date: 3/15/2014 3:54:00 PM
    Excellent, unique

  1. Date: 1/30/2014 2:06:00 AM
    This is very inspirational writing!

  1. Date: 1/23/2014 9:41:00 PM
    this poem was gloriously written with perfection. What a breath of fresh air.

  1. Date: 12/23/2013 12:23:00 PM
    NICE POEM.I enjoyed reading it

  1. Date: 12/4/2013 9:14:00 AM
    I just found this beautiful poem. It is very worthy of being a winner! Congratulations! I absolutely love the vivid, descriptive way you make me see and feel your poem.

  1. Date: 11/21/2013 5:10:00 AM
    Andrea i love the piece you put there, i am not a poet by studying literature or so, just by my fantasy... i am impressed, encouraged since i joined poetrysoup...Congrats!!!

  1. Date: 11/21/2013 12:25:00 AM
    Wowwwwwwww!!!! Biggest congrats eva my dear friend Andrea,u made me proud and got dat bucks....want to experience it like u did. Am so happy some of my close friends are d top shot! Congrats once again! Love u alwaz, Bob- Based on Belief

  1. Date: 9/22/2013 7:18:00 PM
    Creative form--- adds emphasis when lines are repeated like that. I can tell a lot of time and organization was put into this. Congratulations on your win!

  1. Date: 9/16/2013 10:15:00 AM
    nice one.thumbs up!