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Senses Awakened

Go out in the pre-dawn After the night has gone to sleep Before the morning wakes Touch the Dew on the flower petal Taste it, now you know The freshness of water when the earth was new Listen! The only sound is natural Wind through grass, trees Insects and Frogs sending messages See! Light, nature’s alarm clock Calling all creatures to their daily work

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 10/2/2014 9:23:00 AM
Hi, Kieran, I liked your structure of touch, taste, listen, light, and see to write your inspirational morning poem. You put me there and my senses were awakened. Blessings, Darlene
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Date: 6/5/2014 10:35:00 PM
Nature so perfectly explained...Beautiful write :) Ana
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Date: 6/2/2014 5:27:00 AM
Enjoyed the write. congrats on your poem being featured this week,
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Date: 11/11/2012 6:18:00 PM
beautiful poem Kieran, and so very true, love elizabeth
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