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Senses Awakened

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Senses Awakened

Go out in the pre-dawn

After the night has gone to sleep

Before the morning wakes

Touch the Dew on the flower petal

Taste it, now you know

The freshness of water when the earth was new


The only sound is natural

Wind through grass, trees

Insects and Frogs sending messages


Light, nature’s alarm clock

Calling all creatures to their daily work

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  1. Date: 10/2/2014 9:23:00 AM
    Hi, Kieran, I liked your structure of touch, taste, listen, light, and see to write your inspirational morning poem. You put me there and my senses were awakened. Blessings, Darlene

  1. Date: 6/5/2014 10:35:00 PM
    Nature so perfectly explained...Beautiful write :) Ana

  1. Date: 6/2/2014 5:27:00 AM
    Enjoyed the write. congrats on your poem being featured this week,

  1. Date: 11/11/2012 6:18:00 PM
    beautiful poem Kieran, and so very true, love elizabeth

  1. Date: 11/11/2012 5:26:00 PM
    Beautiful poem, keiran. Enjoyed. hugs, catie :)