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Senseless World

Questions of yesterday have been left unanswered Riddles have filled the mind Wondering day by day Trying to finding answers To why the wind cannot be seen yet felt It is a senseless world’

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Matt Poopenheimer

Date: 6/19/2012 12:52:00 PM

hola senor

Judy Ball

Date: 6/18/2012 9:54:00 PM

There are many things that cannot be seen yet they can be felt. Such as emotion cannot be seen yet their effects can be felt. This is very thought provoking. Nice job. What is senseless is why Matt Poopenheim is allowed to remain on the soup. He is rude, crude and not a poet. God Bless, JB

Matt Poopenheimer
Date: 6/19/2012 12:55:00 PM

i address universal subject matter

Nii-Ayi Solomon
Date: 6/19/2012 3:11:00 AM

Thank you JB for your kind words. Really appreciate. I have gone through some of Matt's work and you are not far from right.

Matt Poopenheimer

Date: 6/18/2012 11:02:00 AM

make another poem with poop and post on my poems if u make another poem.

Nii-Ayi Solomon
Date: 6/18/2012 11:04:00 AM

Matt don't really understand your comment. Can you plz explain your self

Matt Poopenheimer

Date: 6/18/2012 11:01:00 AM

bro it needs to be one word longer. if u add poop it will be so much better