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Senseless World

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Senseless World

Questions of yesterday 
have been left unanswered
Riddles have filled the mind
Wondering day by day 
Trying to finding answers
To why the wind cannot be seen yet felt
It is a senseless world’

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  1. Date: 6/19/2012 12:52:00 PM
    hola senor

  1. Date: 6/18/2012 9:54:00 PM
    There are many things that cannot be seen yet they can be felt. Such as emotion cannot be seen yet their effects can be felt. This is very thought provoking. Nice job. What is senseless is why Matt Poopenheim is allowed to remain on the soup. He is rude, crude and not a poet. God Bless, JB

    Poopenheimer Avatar Matt Poopenheimer
    Date: 6/19/2012 12:55:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    i address universal subject matter
    Solomon Avatar Nii-Ayi Solomon
    Date: 6/19/2012 3:11:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you JB for your kind words. Really appreciate. I have gone through some of Matt's work and you are not far from right.
  1. Date: 6/18/2012 11:02:00 AM
    make another poem with poop and post on my poems if u make another poem.

    Solomon Avatar Nii-Ayi Solomon
    Date: 6/18/2012 11:04:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Matt don't really understand your comment. Can you plz explain your self
  1. Date: 6/18/2012 11:01:00 AM
    bro it needs to be one word longer. if u add poop it will be so much better