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Senryu 1

the pain in my chest
never escapes...
seasons changing

Holly P. Moore
October 2012

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  1. Date: 12/3/2012 6:50:00 PM
    oh , yes, I like this one and knowing about you, it makes so much sense.

  1. Date: 10/20/2012 6:43:00 AM
    Holly just excellent, I love the image it invokes, well done...David

  1. Date: 10/20/2012 5:03:00 AM
    I'm no expert on Haiku poems Holly, in my eyes it's very good. -I am not so concerned with "rules" - I write my way and you write your way. - I am seldom writing contest because I want to express myself how to think and feel when I write a poem not by a special shape. - I like to read your poems Holly, you write very well. - I wish you a nice weekend. - oxox love from Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 10/19/2012 9:14:00 PM
    i enjoy reading haikus. This one really made me think. Take care, Jancarl