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Self Surrounds

Lava veins while hand washing
needing a camel,
Forcing bottled water.
Bandanna dream feeding
warning on chem-paper
tinkering on a clip board.

Ear to conditioning air
customer complant service
Blue 80 there table number.

Bush grooming for butts
Pecking the capped
textured by stone, colored dirty.

This hunter's green is in envy
statement from "Laurel"
"Hary" sleeping.

Job-headed to tedious hair
encountering under cloths
Pathos: a beautiful world.

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  1. Date: 2/17/2010 2:41:00 PM
    I said I would be honest with you dearest, and I just don't get it. Maybe I am not intellectual enough to understand your methodology...

  1. Date: 2/1/2010 5:38:00 PM
    Awesome thoughts put to pen Johnathon,Sincerely, Moses

  1. Date: 1/19/2010 10:30:00 AM
    It's so good to see you posting again, Johnathon, and I must say your talent is growing with each write. This is quite a thought-provoking poem, my friend. Well done! Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 1/19/2010 6:07:00 AM
    Johnathan, I enjoyed reading your poem this morning. It was nice to know how you surround yourself! ...things you do!!! Keep writing! Lovingly, Dane Ann

  1. Date: 1/19/2010 5:22:00 AM
    That's a bit too sophisticated for me, I'm puzzled, I like the words, I can feel there is a flow in them, but I don't have the feintest idea what it's about (I'm still quite new at this)