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Self Surrounds

Lava veins while hand washing needing a camel, Forcing bottled water. Bandanna dream feeding warning on chem-paper tinkering on a clip board. Ear to conditioning air customer complant service Blue 80 there table number. Bush grooming for butts Pecking the capped textured by stone, colored dirty. This hunter's green is in envy statement from "Laurel" "Hary" sleeping. Job-headed to tedious hair encountering under cloths Pathos: a beautiful world.

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Tiffany Lothamer

Date: 2/17/2010 2:41:00 PM

I said I would be honest with you dearest, and I just don't get it. Maybe I am not intellectual enough to understand your methodology...

John Freeman

Date: 2/1/2010 5:38:00 PM

Awesome thoughts put to pen Johnathon,Sincerely, Moses

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/19/2010 10:30:00 AM

It's so good to see you posting again, Johnathon, and I must say your talent is growing with each write. This is quite a thought-provoking poem, my friend. Well done! Love, Carolyn

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 1/19/2010 6:07:00 AM

Johnathan, I enjoyed reading your poem this morning. It was nice to know how you surround yourself! ...things you do!!! Keep writing! Lovingly, Dane Ann

Nick Bagnall

Date: 1/19/2010 5:22:00 AM

That's a bit too sophisticated for me, I'm puzzled, I like the words, I can feel there is a flow in them, but I don't have the feintest idea what it's about (I'm still quite new at this)