Self Knowledge In the Aftermath

I remember now. Something was heavy, a winged
dragon that refused to fly from my chest
My eyes were secret mirrors, or a doomsday judge.
I remember morning as a flighty horse,
or like a new school year,
that first careful sentence written on a page.
 
Time became a sequel. Roads were rootless trees
racing by - Fog an x-ray – the night, annoying as a fly.
I had a misconception and her assumptions followed 
every stray dog. I quivered hollow with a frantic yellow zest.
I ate from a dish of nutmeg.
 
I woke to the sound of dying frogs, impossible spiders
trapping rainbows in their webs, the nebulous orbit
of knick knacks in the room, my reach
too small for a mother’s heart.
 
Her seeds had such an element of surprise, her 
plum lipstick, the zing of frayed nerves
she mocked death with a cup of sunshine
she kept an artist’s palette - adding
color to existence
 
Too late, the impossible demand on angels
Each bitter thought the baroque decomposing
of an empty optimism
My keyless lock - emotion



Premiere Contest number 12
Contest Judged:  9/24/2016 12:01:00 AM
Sponsored by: SKAT A 
Placed 9out of 10

Entered in the Best Poem worthy of a Trophy
I have entered this poem because it came from
out of the ether. Some poems just do.
Deeply felt almost not understood but felt on a visceral level.
N/A’d
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013


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Date: 9/24/2016 2:28:00 PM
Suzanne-loved this one :) congratulations on your placement :)-luloo
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Date: 9/24/2016 10:55:00 AM
Congratulations on your win, Suzanne! Janice
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Date: 9/24/2016 12:58:00 AM
Suzanne, Congratulations on your nice win, stop by my blog "Where do poets go." Celebrate with me if you'd like. Take care *SKAT*
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Date: 6/3/2013 1:55:00 PM
This was fun ;You brought so many images come to life Suzanne.You have a wonderfilled mind. Happy daya and love
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Date: 4/21/2013 9:35:00 PM
It is the aftermath that sings--of tragedy and peace, When it rings in our ears, the spoils are ours, and we need them as much as we need water and air. And it is never too late.
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 4/21/2013 10:34:00 PM
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Date: 4/21/2013 11:51:00 AM
nicely done with all those metaphors,, I like mocked death with sunshine. you have a great day Sue ;}
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Date: 4/18/2013 1:41:00 PM
Hello Suzanne, I don't know much about battling addictions. this is a a deep poem, of letting go of the beauty that lies within. I read the poem about 3 times. the image of welcoming death was not in mind. a very intriguing write. I will read the poem one more time before I move on over to the next. I'm sending soup-mail....xox~ Linda
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Date: 4/16/2013 10:04:00 PM
Dear P,S-N, SuZ, I am Awed. The vivid Imagery so clever and keen as if watching YOUR POEM on the Movies Silver Screen.So much POETRY Knowledge from YOU, I gleen.YOUR Quill writes each stanza like the first Act of the new Scene. " Xegrakio " a word I just made up meaning Better then the Best. Usually a POETESS Teaching Laureatus POETS to write beyond their Dream. I LOVE YOU ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR (Honor to Know YOU) Liege...Harry
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 4/16/2013 10:32:00 PM
Dear Harry: It is always so special to have a visit from you. I love your new word and feel so honored. Your S- N and P SuZ
Date: 4/16/2013 9:17:00 PM
Dear P,S-N, SUZ, Since my last comment on YOUR POETRY I have been rummaging through the dictionary,thesaurus(spelling), POEMS of the Masters ( I thought I saw YOUR POEMS there) trying to find words to describe YOUR Elegance.YOU do POETRY an Honor just touching YOUR Quill. I am sorry I am uneducated in the English Language.It probably sounds like I am Perfuming my comments to gain YOUR respect.My words are from my Heart.I LOVE YOU ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Liege...Harry
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Date: 4/15/2013 12:53:00 PM
I am absolutely stunned by this...'she mocked death with a cup of sunshine'...'I quivered hollow with a frantic yellow zest'...Oh how I can identify - Tim
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Date: 4/15/2013 9:47:00 AM
l particularly like the last line. Wishing you the best.
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Date: 4/15/2013 12:26:00 AM
Suz, a miracle of metaphors expressed in exquisite rhetoric like no one but you can. A really impressive poem for thought.
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