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Below is the poem entitled SEEKING EVENING'S PEACE which was written by poet nette onclaud. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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As evening slips its frail chemise Old woman dwells on passing sprees To track hazed lifetime’s reveries; Entrusting stars for pain’s release.
Rhyme Battle: Round 2 Contest

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  1. Date: 12/15/2013 10:44:00 AM
    It's a nice dreamlike poem. Contrasting beauty hidden in it. Congrats very lately, sorry my lovely friend. am was busy. Loved always, bl

  1. Date: 12/11/2013 10:07:00 AM
    Nette .. Congratulations in "'Rhyme Battle: Round 2 contest''...have a nice one... LUV *LINDA

  1. Date: 12/7/2013 8:36:00 PM
    Very elegant, Nette. Congrats!

  1. Date: 12/7/2013 4:49:00 PM
    This is my favorite of all and the most difficult to perceive and synthesize. Lovely, unexpected rhymes that, according to my opinion, deserved high glory. Congrats on the poem and the win. :) G.

  1. Date: 11/21/2013 4:08:00 AM
    nette, your rain contest really made every one nostalgic and was really a pain killer. (: ) Jenish.

  1. Date: 11/18/2013 1:13:00 PM
    Magnificent says it all

  1. Date: 11/18/2013 10:39:00 AM
    Ahh!! Like the metaphoric language in this one..Enjoyed reading ..Sara

  1. Date: 11/18/2013 7:54:00 AM
    Oh, I do like this poem, nette. It is spread across the darkened sky and written with such precise penmanship that the sky is alight with it beauty. Yes.

  1. Date: 11/18/2013 7:34:00 AM
    Hi nette....oh close to home this one hit...loved it...

  1. Date: 11/18/2013 6:53:00 AM
    You so love the night don't you my friend, it is evident again within this write! My favorite line has to be, "Entrusting stars for pains release" this is so true, many people put all their worries upon the stars, so they can be3 relieved of all the pain! This is another masterpiece my friend, such a grand write! I really loved reading this fabulous poem this morning! What a dynamite piece, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 11/18/2013 12:21:00 AM
    Gosh, Nette, you've managed to say so much with so few words. I experience the profound most deeply when immersed in viewing stars.

  1. Date: 11/17/2013 6:28:00 PM
    Got to love those chemises! Light & Love

  1. Date: 11/17/2013 5:25:00 PM
    Wonderful poem. I reminisce a lot these days.

  1. Date: 11/17/2013 4:06:00 PM
    Hi Nette, An awesome and serene write! Ken

  1. Date: 11/17/2013 3:50:00 PM
    So emotional... looking on the stars in a quite-majestic night brings you calmness in many ways we can't even explain. Sometimes, that's where we find the exact peace in our hearts. This one's beutiful. Take care, Nette! Love,love,love! :-) - Den

  1. Date: 11/17/2013 3:40:00 PM
    This is very different but it has alot of feeling in the lines thank you for sharing. alos thank you for your comments.

  1. Date: 11/17/2013 1:24:00 PM
    - Happiness is not to be 100 years - happiness is living now - Wistful written with beautiful thoughts. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 11/17/2013 1:12:00 PM
    A stream of beautifully penned thoughts on life and mortality. Lovely flow until I hit the penultimate line "entrusting stars for pain's release*.. Unexpectedly a knock- out, Nette.

  1. Date: 11/17/2013 1:00:00 PM

  1. Date: 11/17/2013 12:19:00 PM
    Brilliant like the stars she gazes upon.