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Seeing To The Door

This bliss rover I.
Lazed fresh muddy-smoke,
In hot-rate envy.
A digital glow moans,
2 am, lighting my skin.

She easily, nameless,
Just left.
My mass sweat,
On my cotton-mix.
She a slapdash, I letting.

Hour previous, world dyed in smut.
Three ago she open, breathing.
I flush, on decernables,
Day ago, I was settling,
On her far possibilities.

Shame thinking 
Justice grasping.
"All in all" apes right.
Upright, stone carving.
Tailoring white pillows,
With black market Viagra.

Her last words.
"Your precious"
Cleverly my eyes
Nuzzel wood floors.
Then sleep, a push to morning.
I did see her to the door.

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  1. Date: 11/22/2010 9:08:00 AM
    I think this is awesome man.

  1. Date: 11/12/2010 11:52:00 AM
    Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round of the Poetrysoup site contest Johnathon. The best to you in the finals. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 11/8/2010 10:19:00 AM
    Congratulations on your poem being featured this week Johnathon. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 12/22/2009 7:04:00 AM
    There is a Jamaican poet, Dennis Scot, I cut my teeth on him ... O we share some same sensibilities ... but you are crisp, stronger than I, great drift in the word

  1. Date: 12/19/2009 7:58:00 AM
    Some things are clearer "She a slapdash I savior/savor? "letting?" veagra/Viagra. Trinity shame thinking ...I don't get how these Justice grasping....two lines connect to the following "All in all" apes right. Upright, stone carving. Tailoring white pillows, With black market Viagra. Previuos 4 lines VERY VERY good Much improved in coherance!!!Light & Love

  1. Date: 12/17/2009 2:16:00 PM
    "Holy trinity thinking/Justice grasping." idea hon which holy trinity? if she is a sexual savior sent from God we need more clues? Hope this is some help. Light & Love and onward per your request!

  1. Date: 12/17/2009 2:15:00 PM
    (Any 4 letter word in a title should be capitalized ;)..) Ok very unique write..also disjointed...first I switch to present tense (no ed's) I think perhaps there's not quite enough "bread crumbs" we know it's a sexual encounter yet certain phrases are a bit too puzzling? "Off a off screen."? Off an off screen..(a porn site?) "She slapdashed, savior letting." ..Slapdash she, savior letting?/getting?