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Seeing Through The Rain

                             When I stare off into the horizon it's always clear...
                       The blur of life in front of me is sometimes drizzled in fear...
                     No matter how hard I squint the clouds still dance in my view...
         Through my travels in life I've searched for me in storms that touched me too...
                        Sunrises and sunsets that never seemed to come in time...
                                Left me standing all alone in the back of the line...
                   Although now a man who finds words that are barely dipped in pain...
                          I am now a poet who see's passed the showers and the rain...


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  1. Date: 8/5/2012 11:27:00 PM
    Michael, seeing pass it all... wow! the ending of your poem, took the STORM out of my way. Just the thought made me feel how strong one is. Maybe putting it out here helps... this has been fun..good night..PD

  1. Date: 8/5/2012 12:02:00 PM
    MJF I feel like adding and a better man at that.. Your introspective writes always force me to look beyond your words, it has a deeper meaning to them.. okay that is just my two cents lol love & hugs CTH

  1. Date: 8/5/2012 4:56:00 AM
    Michael very well said, a poet you are indeed, though I am glad to see you are out of that pool, your skin must be wrinkled to hell by now, moisturise my friend.....David

  1. Date: 8/4/2012 1:59:00 PM
    hi Mike. Ron here. my wife isin hospital. see blog I did for her today. needs neck surgery Monday. know she was to call tomorrow but plans changed due to this unexpected injury.. keep you posted.

  1. Date: 8/4/2012 10:39:00 AM
    Strong and very visual words here my friend.Glad to see you keeping your pen busy.After reading this rhyme twice,I realize that there`s a strong write even between the lines here.Outstanding,(as always!) Have a great Saturday over there Michael!

  1. Date: 8/4/2012 9:33:00 AM
    What a beautiful write my friend! I just love this incredible write Michael! Thank you for writing this illustrious piece! Great Work!!

  1. Date: 8/4/2012 8:53:00 AM
    Nice one Michael glad you can see past the rain xx