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See Me Again

See Me Again "Ghost Town Treasure" Was my fav'rite book You'd read it to me At the end I'd plead You'd read it again. The beach! Such pleasure! A picnic you took To eat by the sea At the end I'd plead You'd take me again. My birthday that year Two snowball cupcakes-- Best birthday I've had 'Oh, Thank you!', I'd plead And you would just grin. Pillow-case---a ghost On Halloween days Paper bag full...sad At the end I'd plead You'd take me again. And ever watchfull Over years I'd find Your face...mine...one look At the end I'd plead 'Mom! See Me again!' Times' hands did Not pull My face to your mind Or reading my book... At the end I'd plead And you'd just grin. ©deborah burch 4/01/2012 *This poem is dedicated to all the children and spouses of Mothers (and wives) with ALZ...and to the awareness of its heartbreaking torment. Hopefully one day we can prevent it, cure it -- stop it! To all Mothers everywhere and especially those with Alzhiemers' Disease (ALZ): HAPPY MOTHER'S DAY 2012!!! Form:verse

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Date: 4/5/2012 8:56:00 PM
Congrats on your win wonderful win, Deborah! Love, Kim
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Date: 4/5/2012 6:30:00 AM
A belated congratulations to you for your win in P.D's "Mothers day" contest Deborah. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/4/2012 7:46:00 AM
Congratulation on win enjoyed reading your poetry this morning and Learned a new word. Thank you Deborah for comment on poem and sharing
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Date: 4/4/2012 8:39:00 PM
LOL. Thank you John...I shudder to think which one...LOL Thanks for stopping by and all the encouragement...big huggsss,love deb
Date: 4/3/2012 9:54:00 PM
Deborah, Congratulations with your beautiful and heart touching mother'' poem. My mother is still recovering from surgery,, even when and if she recovers,, she will never come back to us.. all because of that disease...thank you for supporting my contest*. Have yourself a good night. It was an honor having your poem in my contest, luv~PD
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Date: 4/3/2012 9:36:00 PM
Just wonderful!! Congrats on your win! (sorry about the ALZ. My stepdad died from it. it's a most horrid thing)
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Date: 4/3/2012 8:56:00 PM
congrats Deborah on an exciting write and win for Mother contest.. simply lovely luv..
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Date: 4/3/2012 8:36:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with this heartbreaking poem. I am glad you have such happy memoriies to carry you through. Love, Joyce
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Date: 4/3/2012 7:23:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Deb. Excellent write. Enjoyed. Nice going. hugs, Ralph
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Date: 4/2/2012 4:55:00 PM
1 Of the highlights of my visit to soup today Deborah , best of luck in the competition , Hugs , Declan xxx
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Date: 4/2/2012 3:13:00 PM
thankxx for sharing this dynamic write Deborah.. it does bring great awareness indeed .. children are so special.. an amazing presentation luv..
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Date: 4/2/2012 11:30:00 AM
What a touching and heartfilled story you tell. And the dedication at the end, is so moving and wonderful to bring awareness to so many! Lovely poem!!
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Date: 4/2/2012 7:12:00 AM
oh, how i can relate to this, deb. did a poem on ALZ before.. a touching piece filled with sentimental portrayal of the theme.. winning hugggs! :)
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Date: 4/2/2012 6:43:00 AM
Beautiful piece. I did not lost my mother to ALZ, but to suicide as a child. I was the one who found her so I know the pains of losing one's mother. Please read my Mother, Missing You, Mother and These Tears Weren't Meant For Me.
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Date: 4/2/2012 6:04:00 AM
You have shared a very nice poem for Mother's Day, Deborah. Thank you.
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