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Seductive Disarray

I didn't crumble or drift off into a fade... I shrugged off goodbyes faster then they were made... Watched as they were dipped and soaked in my poetic rage... As I threw a fist full of words against a framed blank page... I sat and watched my emotions scatter artistically... Like candles on a wall it poured in colors so intensely... A portrait of a misguided soul that has lost its way... To a poet who paints with a pen in seductive disarray...

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Karen Harris

Date: 2/19/2013 11:57:00 AM

VERY NICE !!

Jacob Cra

Date: 12/8/2012 1:12:00 PM

Wow, this poem is spectacular, by far one of my favorites I have ever read (and I'm not just saying that). Is it published or what? It's really good, and you are extremely talented... I've read some of your other poems as well. You should visit my site: poeticpossibilities.tk ! I think this poem could have a really good chance of winning one of our contests! Wish you the best with your poetry and I hope you get published! : )Jacob Cramer

Eileen Manassian

Date: 12/8/2012 12:24:00 PM

My favorite line?? As I threw a fist full of words against a framed blank page! Awesome imagery! Great poem! :)

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 12/6/2012 6:09:00 PM

very provacative. Light & Love

Yanny Widjanarko

Date: 12/3/2012 6:25:00 PM

This is really a seductive rhyme Michael, you are really in deep with all of your sense of a poet, I love this one :D

Don Johnson

Date: 12/2/2012 2:45:00 PM

Good on ya Michael mate, words are tools you demonstrate:) love it, let the great words flow!

Deborah Shepard

Date: 12/1/2012 2:06:00 AM

Beautifully written, love to light

Shaz Cheesman

Date: 11/30/2012 11:24:00 PM

Artistry in poetry and theatrical motion here Michael. Nicely done.

Harry Horsman

Date: 11/30/2012 2:47:00 PM

wow Michael this is truly an excellent poem, both very clever and inspiring...

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/30/2012 7:47:00 AM

Emotive and expressive work that you have penned..I think that we have all been there and back and probably again..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/30/2012 7:52:00 AM

I am going to fav this one and print it out.. It has given me some ideas..I might give a reply..I just don't know how and when..Sara

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 11/30/2012 7:43:00 AM

I like the way you have described your emotions here. You are a true poet. I also appreciate your visit and comment.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/29/2012 9:36:00 PM

amazing visual imagery with words chosen to express feelings Michael luv .. forever your JG ..xoxo your words always make me soar with a smile ..

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/29/2012 8:26:00 PM

Hello Michael, the image of you finding yourself in a confused state is normal. A very deep rage of emotions. I like the way you lingered the word.. "POETIC RAGE." I m wondering what poet paints with this kind of order... thank you for sharing, always~ PD

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/29/2012 5:24:00 PM

oooh, this is the perfect title for one like this: seductive disarray. VERY creative!

Joseph May

Date: 11/29/2012 4:23:00 PM

nicely penned Michael....thanks for those kind words...Love how you paint your words on the poetic canvas also....

Ilene Bauer

Date: 11/29/2012 3:59:00 PM

i like the way you described that anger - well done!

Tanya Harrington

Date: 11/29/2012 1:20:00 PM

Oooo, can feel the fiery glower of your angst and ire. Like it. :) Tanya

Russell Sivey

Date: 11/29/2012 1:05:00 PM

Wow, Michael, you sure have gotten your creative pen back, no more writers block for you...it has been a while since you had that though I guess! Anyway, this is a fantastic and delightful write, I really enjoyed reading this incredibly awesome poem this afternoon! What a fascinating piece, Great Work!!