Michael J. Falotico Poet Rhyme

Seductive Disarray

I didn't crumble or drift off into a fade...
I shrugged off goodbyes faster then they were made...
Watched as they were dipped and soaked in my poetic rage...
As I threw a fist full of words against a framed blank page...
I sat and watched my emotions scatter artistically...
Like candles on a wall it poured in colors so intensely...
A portrait of a misguided soul that has lost its way...
To a poet who paints with a pen in seductive disarray...

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Karen Harris February 19, 2013 at 11:57 AM VERY NICE !!

Jacob Cra December 8, 2012 at 1:12 PM Wow, this poem is spectacular, by far one of my favorites I have ever read (and I'm not just saying that). Is it published or what? It's really good, and you are extremely talented... I've read some of your other poems as well. You should visit my site: poeticpossibilities.tk ! I think this poem could have a really good chance of winning one of our contests! Wish you the best with your poetry and I hope you get published! : )Jacob Cramer

Eileen Manassian December 8, 2012 at 12:24 PM My favorite line?? As I threw a fist full of words against a framed blank page! Awesome imagery! Great poem! :)

Debbie Guzzi December 6, 2012 at 6:09 PM very provacative. Light & Love

Yanny Widjanarko December 3, 2012 at 6:25 PM This is really a seductive rhyme Michael, you are really in deep with all of your sense of a poet, I love this one :D

Don Johnson December 2, 2012 at 2:45 PM Good on ya Michael mate, words are tools you demonstrate:) love it, let the great words flow!

Deborah Shepard December 1, 2012 at 2:06 AM Beautifully written, love to light

Shaz Cheesman November 30, 2012 at 11:24 PM Artistry in poetry and theatrical motion here Michael. Nicely done.

Harry Horsman November 30, 2012 at 2:47 PM wow Michael this is truly an excellent poem, both very clever and inspiring...

Sara Kendrick November 30, 2012 at 7:47 AM Emotive and expressive work that you have penned..I think that we have all been there and back and probably again..Thanks for stopping by..Sara Sara Kendrick November 30, 2012 at 7:52 AM I am going to fav this one and print it out.. It has given me some ideas..I might give a reply..I just don't know how and when..Sara

Richard Lamoureux November 30, 2012 at 7:43 AM I like the way you have described your emotions here. You are a true poet. I also appreciate your visit and comment.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart November 29, 2012 at 9:36 PM amazing visual imagery with words chosen to express feelings Michael luv .. forever your JG ..xoxo your words always make me soar with a smile ..

Poet Destroyer A November 29, 2012 at 8:26 PM Hello Michael, the image of you finding yourself in a confused state is normal. A very deep rage of emotions. I like the way you lingered the word.. "POETIC RAGE." I m wondering what poet paints with this kind of order... thank you for sharing, always~ PD

Andrea Dietrich November 29, 2012 at 5:24 PM oooh, this is the perfect title for one like this: seductive disarray. VERY creative!

Joseph May November 29, 2012 at 4:23 PM nicely penned Michael....thanks for those kind words...Love how you paint your words on the poetic canvas also....

Ilene Bauer November 29, 2012 at 3:59 PM i like the way you described that anger - well done!

Tanya Harrington November 29, 2012 at 1:20 PM Oooo, can feel the fiery glower of your angst and ire. Like it. :) Tanya

Russell Sivey November 29, 2012 at 1:05 PM Wow, Michael, you sure have gotten your creative pen back, no more writers block for you...it has been a while since you had that though I guess! Anyway, this is a fantastic and delightful write, I really enjoyed reading this incredibly awesome poem this afternoon! What a fascinating piece, Great Work!!