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Secreted Pond

                              Quixotic are we
                     Our bliss every night one kiss
                           A phantom mirrored
                       In a fervent moonlit pond
                         Like Nushi and Suseri*

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  1. Date: 6/14/2012 5:04:00 AM
    A belated congratulations on your win in ^Rick's "Lets Pass A Tanka Love Note" contest Amy. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 6/11/2012 8:42:00 PM
    Congrats on your win Amy! It's fabulous and I love how you referenced Japanese mythology. A fave for me. Love and Blessings, Rhonda

  1. Date: 6/11/2012 1:13:00 PM
    Love how you wrote it using Japanese mythology as subject matter. It seems to be a bit more 'authentic'. Congrats on your win....Tanya

  1. Date: 6/11/2012 4:07:00 AM

  1. Date: 6/11/2012 2:18:00 AM
    Amy congrats on your win...David

  1. Date: 6/10/2012 8:17:00 PM
    boy, that Rick sure knows how to pick some great winners. I am loving all the poems on the winner list tonight. so cool how you referenced these tragic lovers. Congrats.

  1. Date: 6/10/2012 5:28:00 PM
    Love this one!!!!!Great imagery- Beautiful story....................Hushed in passion's heat!!!;-) Congrats

  1. Date: 6/7/2012 11:35:00 PM
    I didn't know their lovers story either Amy, thank you for sharing a beautiful write.

  1. Date: 5/27/2012 4:58:00 PM
    You read Japanese mythology to Amy, completed poem for the contest, hope for a win for you. - oxox Anne-Lise

  1. Date: 5/27/2012 3:06:00 AM
    Great, I didn't know of Nushi and Suseri, thank you for sharing their mythological story. Loved your Tanka.

  1. Date: 5/26/2012 9:48:00 PM
    I love how you put the Japanese mythology into it. I bet Rick will love that!! Great tanka.