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secret contest

paralyzed patient
her chart says I fed her
I didn't


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  1. Date: 1/12/2014 4:42:00 PM
    ohh, clever one here, Susan - thanks very much, loved the contest

  1. Date: 5/2/2013 9:25:00 PM
    Intresting! Are you a nurse? I like this form and you use well. Peace & Love Matthew Anish

  1. Date: 4/22/2013 11:47:00 PM
    Wow, the implications in this were a bit of a shocker. How would you know if you fed her or not, if not for the chart? I wonder if you wish the person harm or just simply forgot. Either way, the person looks the same, and that's the worst part. A very awesome senryu! You told a much bigger story that the actual content provided. It's implications that make haiku and senryu such a pleasure to read.

  1. Date: 4/21/2013 2:47:00 AM
    Congratulations on you win with this powerful, moving senryu. Thank you also for my wonderful placement in your cherry blossom haku contest. I feel very honored.

  1. Date: 4/19/2013 5:31:00 PM

  1. Date: 4/15/2013 9:10:00 PM
    Hi Susan, if you are reading this comment after I said goodnight 2 hours ago, then this is just a recording stopping by to celebrate your secretive entry in Judy's contest. Congrats with your awesome win... always~ PD

  1. Date: 4/14/2013 3:07:00 PM
    Deaf, dumb and blind, who knew if she'd mind. But paralization leaves lips of frustration. And stomachs that begin to talk. Congrats on your placement. :)

  1. Date: 4/14/2013 10:09:00 AM
    Hi Black Eyed Susan, Congratulations on your win ... Samia

  1. Date: 4/14/2013 12:00:00 AM
    This to me is a classic secret you have revealed. Congrats on your deserving win... Well done ~A.O

  1. Date: 4/13/2013 10:49:00 PM
    Congrat on your win friend Susan :)

  1. Date: 4/13/2013 8:51:00 PM
    Thank you for entering my contest

  1. Date: 4/12/2013 7:13:00 PM
    OH YES, Now THIS is one I like to see for the secret contest. Maybe I am wrong, but I just take it as a funny one!!

  1. Date: 4/11/2013 5:16:00 PM
    I bet this nurse works where my mom's at. Susan, got to watch out for deep secrets like this. I hope it is not yours. Is it someone you know. anyways! Hope you got my message.. Have yourself a nice one, always & forever* Linda

  1. Date: 4/11/2013 2:54:00 PM
    wow! there are a couple of ways to interpret this and i like the fact that i'm sure how you meant it. that makes the secret more intriguing...

  1. Date: 4/11/2013 12:47:00 PM
    ooops, looks like your are getting the blame however! Intriguing write Susan, I enjoyed reading it immensely! Great Work!!

  1. Date: 4/11/2013 12:24:00 PM
    ... it must reported!! - Well done B.E.S. - Luck in contest! - oxox / / Anne-Lise (nurse) :)

  1. Date: 4/11/2013 12:24:00 PM
    sad state of affairs...though I'm sure it happens ...