Seasons

with winter upon and fall left to far behind bringing spring summer

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James Fraser

Date: 2/1/2011 3:00:00 PM

Roll on Spring and Summer, both seasons bring the smiles back to our faces....:)

Joe Maverick

Date: 1/31/2011 8:08:00 AM

brig it on! good one Robert.

Robert Shreve

Date: 1/31/2011 6:42:00 AM

thanks for the great feedback

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/30/2011 10:02:00 PM

Nice one, Robert! Luv, Andrea

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 1/30/2011 7:07:00 PM

Good haiku with nice images, Robert

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/30/2011 5:44:00 PM

good write on seasons in this haiku, enjoyed,..p.d.

Ryan Nash

Date: 1/30/2011 5:02:00 PM

I've never had a real talent for the haiku, but I've always found it cool. The last line stands out: "bringing spring summer." The words flow together, yet their sounds are kind of "bouncy"/springy. No pun intended...

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/30/2011 5:01:00 PM

Good one..We are all about ready for the next season..Sara