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Sea of Love

deprived of full moon my love is cradled by the arms of a first star until your eyes can see through the clouds of a deep blue night
___________________________________ For Francine's Contest: Five or Less (serious)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 6/22/2013 5:31:00 PM
Is it on the winners' list, Carrie. I gotta go see now that he did it. I hope you won with this.
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Date: 6/22/2013 9:35:00 AM
So small , yet says a lot....:):)
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Date: 6/21/2013 3:12:00 PM
Very beautiful, Carrie.
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Date: 6/21/2013 11:56:00 AM
Awesome! Such beauty displayed in a few lines
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Date: 6/21/2013 11:13:00 AM
I don't know why I don't just give up..lol. this is so beautiful. BG
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Date: 6/21/2013 10:53:00 AM
I can just hear Robert Plant of the Honeydrippers singing his song with the same title. Good write.
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Date: 6/21/2013 10:21:00 AM
Reach for the clarity that will help hungry eyes & hands see again...stunning piece!
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