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'Sea Breeze'

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'Sea Breeze'

All I see is water 
As far as my eyes will allow me

Almost forgot
What brought me here

It was the memories of you

The warmth of the sand
 In between my toes
A gentle reminder of what it felt like
Having you next to me

Holding my hand as we took
Our walks along the shore
We didn't have to say a word
Just allow the gentle sea breeze
To mask our footprints as we went

Could have been a similar day,
Could have been a similar time

But today -

It’s just me and the gentle sea breeze

To remind me of you
Not saying a word
And yet I can feel you
With every step I take


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  1. Date: 9/10/2013 5:23:00 AM

  1. Date: 8/18/2013 7:16:00 PM
    Nostalgia would be the word to best describe this poem. Good write

  1. Date: 6/27/2013 9:04:00 AM
    Every poem I've read of yours touched me deeply..I love that feeling Wilma.. :)

  1. Date: 6/25/2013 2:26:00 PM
    You have communicated a deep yearning through these lines Wilma; very touching indeed the weather here was cold enough last week we will have better this week they say, thank you for dropping by..'

  1. Date: 6/20/2013 9:43:00 AM
    this is so moving Wilma,so you, you are indeed a wondrous poet, one i am so proud to know...

  1. Date: 6/17/2013 1:26:00 PM
    mellow words enchant me so, wilms... you are tops!..:) huggs

  1. Date: 6/15/2013 2:02:00 PM
    this is one of your best,Wilma. Keep them coming like this one!!

  1. Date: 6/14/2013 1:45:00 PM
    Beautiful poem here Wilma!Love this poignant write.Glad to see a new poem from you Wilma.

  1. Date: 6/14/2013 10:45:00 AM
    "Every step I take, every move I make". Diggin' this good! Embrace the loving winds.

  1. Date: 6/14/2013 10:34:00 AM
    beautiful and very poignant!

  1. Date: 6/14/2013 9:53:00 AM
    Wow, such a powerful walk this write took me on my friend! I truly enjoyed reading this amazing poem this morning! What a delightful piece, Great work!!

  1. Date: 6/14/2013 7:27:00 AM
    I walk with you see it through your eyes so poignant yet whimsical too very fine pen