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Sea Serpent

I saw it on a stormy night When lightning struck the sea, The waves crushed on the sand with might the wind howled endlessly. I stood upon the midnight shore The rain cold on my face, The echo of the oceans roar A haunting sound embrace. Then with the lightning flash I saw A creature through the mist, It’s slender neck rose with the roar Of lightning, and it hissed. Its oval head with glowing eyes A moment caught in light, A creature found in myths and lies I saw within that night. Then with that moment it was gone Yet in my memory, I see it in the lightning’s sun A serpent in the sea.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 4/7/2013 6:34:00 PM
great story and flow of words..... SuZ
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Date: 4/28/2011 3:46:00 PM
Are you absolutely certain you were not at Loch Ness?
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Date: 4/21/2011 1:53:00 PM
Reminds me of Ireland with mystery in lakes there. good one. Anne
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Date: 8/27/2010 8:58:00 AM
I really liked the images you've created with this one..you really are talented. I just love your work. Emily
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