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Scye By the Bye

Jay: I can not see the stars in the city; But they can see me. I can see the brightest ones; So they can still guide me. So it doesn't matter; I know they are still out there. Even if the sky is covered with clouds; They are copper colored clouds that still light my way. And will never leave me in the dark. My eyes hold light. Stu: So close yet so far; So bright in a galaxy of darkness; Glitter on the canvas of the cosmos; Each spec, a speck; Colossal size; For light to meet our eyes; Where even the biggest, Has no comparison in size; Big or tall, Bright enough to be seen by all. Jay: Our eyes hold light.

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Date: 5/13/2016 11:39:00 PM
jaylyne, Fantastic writing, glad to read your poem tonight. Forever ~LINDA~
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Date: 5/12/2016 9:01:00 AM
Jaylyne,, creative and well done. Thank you for sharing. **SKAT**
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Date: 12/23/2010 1:14:00 PM
Nice title and equally nice deep meaningful write the stars, Jaylyne
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Date: 12/23/2010 12:35:00 PM
With help from my friend "Stu" His gift to me, his writing from thought off my thoughts making a beautiful duet of words forming absolute poetry.
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