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Scorching in Our own Passions

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Scorching in Our own Passions

Heart swelling, blood pumping swiftly through my veins,
        	Blood warming my skin, relaxes each and every muscle.
Lungs collapsing, air inhaled brings tranquility,
        	Every appendage at peace while intentions tense into knots inside my brain.
Soul thriving, aggressively attempting to be released into space,
        	Along the stars where it belongs to sore, it remains vigorously trembling inside serenity.
Mind vanished, nearly letting the soul take over,
        	Though the soul is inattentive.

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  1. Date: 1/18/2015 11:16:00 AM
    powerful piece of writing lisa love the imaginary used

  1. Date: 9/9/2013 9:01:00 PM
    Hi Lisa,, Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* Skat * ...

  1. Date: 9/8/2013 8:11:00 PM
    Thanks for the entry

  1. Date: 9/8/2013 3:49:00 PM
    Hi, Lisa, thank you for expressing your write and finding this site. -A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@

  1. Date: 9/8/2013 3:13:00 PM
    Welcome to P-Soup, Lisa ! - Nice to read your first poem here. - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours. - My first greeting to you from Norway / / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 9/8/2013 3:01:00 PM
    Strong, yet serene in the physical & mental release of this writing. Awesome last line! Nice to meet you, Lisa. Great job!