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Schooldays Sweethearts

Schooldays sweethearts, they grew through their teens Enjoying life together living their young scenes He knew there would be a day to complete their task He went down on one knee, he'd a question to ask My darling Elaine will you please marry me I want to be with you for all eternity Their day arrives inside the church he awaits A silver Rolls Royce arrives at the gates Out steps a lassie in splendid bridal gown Sparkling in white with her diamond tiara crown The music plays as she walks down the aisle So gorgeous and radiant as we await her smile She lifts her veil as she faces her husband to be As we await their vows for the whole church to see The words we have waited for are beautifully said I do to each other as now they are wed The reception awaits and the cutting off the cake As they share a kiss remembering their first date

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Date: 12/1/2014 5:55:00 AM
i never heard of this form.. but i like the story telling on your couplet.. :) hope I soon to be like that radiant in....:)
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James Fraser
Date: 12/1/2014 1:31:00 PM
I've always liked the name Elaine since there was an Elaine in my Primary School Class. I like it so much my daughter is Rebekah Elaine Fraser - James :)
Date: 9/27/2010 9:04:00 AM
"Big congratulations James on your success in the top 10! Agape, Moses
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Date: 9/27/2010 6:13:00 AM
Congratulations on your win James in Dr. Ram Mehta's contest "Epithalamium" Love,Carol
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Date: 9/19/2010 2:37:00 PM
James this one left me with a grin on my face. Sweet write, congratulations on your win. Hope your Sunday has been all you expected - Wilma
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Date: 9/19/2010 8:17:00 AM
Oh yes James, I remember my school day sweet heart. Big Congratulations on your worthy poem's success in Dr Ram's awesome contest. Agape, Moses
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Date: 9/19/2010 7:12:00 AM
Congrats James on your great win in Dr. Ram's contest.. an extraordinary write and wonderful win for u to enjoy this happy Sunday with luv..
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Date: 9/19/2010 6:26:00 AM
I enjoyed this write and congratulations for the win, James
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Date: 8/25/2010 2:20:00 PM
It sounds like a wonderful, traditional wedding, James. You wrote it in the first person, so I imagine you were recalling your wedding day. She's a very lucky bride. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 8/22/2010 4:51:00 PM
excellent James. Nicely done
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Date: 8/22/2010 10:19:00 AM
VEry nice!! wonder when I will find the mole poem. haha. I really should just go to the contest page, but I haven't seen a lot of your recent poem! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 8/21/2010 7:02:00 PM
Thanks for supporting my contest
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Date: 8/21/2010 6:04:00 PM
A wonderful poem here Mr. Fraser ! Thanx for reminding me of a beautiful time in my life, though I felt at that moment I had 10 cups of black coffee and drank a cup of turpentine ! *smiles* Great write Sir ! james
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Date: 8/21/2010 5:44:00 PM
awww high school sweethearts tying the knot:), a pleasure to read this saturday. *LUV ~S.K.A.T.
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Date: 8/21/2010 4:58:00 PM
Smile ~ "Very Beautiful Painting of Loves Grand Moment My Dear Friend!!!" ~ You are quite a gifted and wonderful writer James; able to touch minds, hearts and souls no matter what topic of verse You so choose to brush and display ~ "The Perfect Beautiful Portrait Here; Many A Hearts Dreams" ~ "Much Love & Warmth to You & Yours Always," John! ~ Smile, "Have A Beautiful Tomorrow My Friend;" Bye!:) ~
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Date: 8/21/2010 2:06:00 PM
Lovely James, enjoyed your sweet way of writing about them school days,..p.d.
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