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Scars Left Behind

cigarette burns
up and down her left arm
morse code s.o.s

1/20/13
Black Eyed Susan

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Bernard Colasurdo

Date: 4/20/2013 8:34:00 PM

Hi Susan, Wow! said it so perfectly succinct. Congratulations!!! Sent you a soup mail

Dinda Minardi

Date: 3/17/2013 10:18:00 AM

so many deliver with only so little words. greatly penned, Susan.

Cynthia Alvez

Date: 2/8/2013 7:27:00 PM

Now is the time for all good friends to do something! Nice Senryu Cynthia

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/8/2013 5:57:00 PM

Yayyy, I see you got a win. Big congrats, Susan.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/7/2013 11:01:00 AM

congrats..PD

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 2/7/2013 10:26:00 AM

Belated Conrats on your top spot Susan xx

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 2/6/2013 7:00:00 PM

Wowser! You sure addressed the issue head on and with so few words! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 2/5/2013 6:52:00 PM

Very well written and very real problem. Congrats

Connie Gildersleeve

Date: 2/5/2013 6:42:00 PM

Powerful words. Congrats on your win. Warm Smiles, Connie

Nathan D.

Date: 1/31/2013 10:03:00 AM

very cool write very true also

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/31/2013 6:55:00 AM

DANGEROUS, DANGEROUS ....... HELP! - STOP SMOKING! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/30/2013 11:43:00 PM

soupmail

Jack Horne

Date: 1/26/2013 2:20:00 PM

love this powerful and scary write, Susan. Thanks very much - great contest : )

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/24/2013 6:49:00 AM

Hi, Susan, just stopping by your newest poem again. Hope to see you over here more often!

Len Gasun

Date: 1/22/2013 9:37:00 AM

This is an excellent and beautifully sad Senryu my dearest friend, Susan! Thank you so much for sharing! I hope you're doing well. I'm missing one of my fav. poets, also one of my reasons of stopping by. Have a great day always! love and big hugs, Leonora

Carrie Richards

Date: 1/20/2013 5:30:00 PM

Wow......this is dark, dramatic, and somber. well done. ps.....and many thanks, Susan, for my placement in "Taken". An honor it was !!

Kim Merryman

Date: 1/20/2013 1:27:00 PM

Great senryu, Susan. Dramatic! Love, Kim

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/20/2013 11:46:00 AM

I LIKES it, Susan!!! I know you can give us even more than that though. Surely you have written others recently. Post them up!!! and try some of the contest themes. It's great to see you here today.