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Saturday Night

It’s Saturday night and I smell your hair Like the sixteenth of September; When you traced with a silent stare The star-studded sky to remember, Andromeda and her plight of fear That death would devour her heart so tender. I see that midnight ocean upon your eyes; Its thick billows break upon your lashes, And the still beauty of this night does not disguise – The fierce fervour of your heart that flashes Through the raining lies that spell our demise In grey fumes of hate and ashes. But I dare cross such tempests to slay Love’s foe and binding chains I’ll break, That like Perseus with much merit may Save you for my own and take Your gaze from starry dreams, and lay Upon your lips, a kiss.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2007




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Date: 8/13/2008 3:10:00 PM
I like this poem, Omesh. I can see why it was featured. Keep up the good work, God Bless, Cile
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Date: 8/11/2008 9:40:00 AM
Congratulations Omesh on your beautiful poem being featured once again. Love, Shar
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Date: 8/11/2008 5:12:00 AM
Omesh - loved your poem - congrats on being featured - God Bless
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Date: 8/11/2008 3:57:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured once again this week Omesh . Love, Carol
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Date: 8/10/2008 5:41:00 PM
Congrats on the re-feature. Vince
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