Satirical, Slapstick, and Self-Depracating

Well, it's back to the sillies I go This serious stuff is hurting my brain If you notice I'm being serious again Admonish me, must be totally insane Must maintain my “silly” status Or I'll totally fade away from the scene “D'ya hear bout a guy who walked into a bar” Sorry! Well you know what I mean My humour's more of a cerebral nature Yah right! Who am I trying to kid? I'm down with all the rest of those guys An image I could never get rid Satirical, slapstick or self-deprecating Puns creeps in now and then Not what you'd call that high brow stuff A hit with my P-Soup friends Well hopefully I've got my point across Though I might write a “serious” again But they'll be rare, few and far between A great big relief for my brain © Jack Ellison 2013
* Wrote this one a while back *
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013


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Date: 9/13/2013 8:24:00 PM
I love how you write some serious, touching stuff and then come out with a poem to serve as comic relief. It's a breath of fresh air for some poets, particularly myself. I tend to write about darker subjects. Though I have been writing a couple of lighthearted ones. You're inspiring. Thanks.
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Date: 9/14/2013 6:30:00 AM
Will you be my friend? LOL You take me to the highest highs! Words are not enough to show how I appreciate your warm comments! Love, Jack xoxox
Date: 9/13/2013 8:24:00 PM
Also, I like how you write like your just having a lighthearted conversation with them, but at the same time it rhymes. Your personality shines in all of them is what I mean to say I guess. I respect that! I can't wait for what you'll write next! Always, Laura
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Date: 9/14/2013 6:31:00 AM
You are so so so so sweet Miss Laura! WOWSERS! Thank you dear Laura... love, Jack xoxox
Date: 9/11/2013 9:57:00 AM
You go Jack! Whatever makes you happy! Dragon loved his sea food lunch! Now he's all excited about seeing the ocean! But he's to young to travel that far, yet... He applied for an U.P.S. job the other day... But the union said he had to wait till he's over nappie times before he can join them. Read 'Dragon, The UPS Guy'... Might tickle your funny bone... Our UPS Guy got a kick out of it. Dragon idolizes him, almost as much as he idolizes, you! But you're always one step ahead of everybody... LOL
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Date: 9/11/2013 10:16:00 AM
Sooooooooo sweet of Dragon and you! Youis the best! Many warm hugs coming your way xoxoxox
Date: 9/11/2013 9:01:00 AM
Yes, don't let your brain implode in misery, degradation, & self-pity. It's rampant on the internet & in society, as a whole. It's so easy to fall, yet hard to stand up. But, only we make it so difficult. Kudos on this. Some should heed this advice...like, yesterday. Spot on, sir.
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Date: 9/11/2013 10:14:00 AM
Many many sincere thanks my talented friend... your comments are always appreciated and welcomed! Cheers... have a great day, Drake
Date: 9/11/2013 7:51:00 AM
OH KENNY! I loved the serious one you did about how we must have a happy nature...TOP OF THE WORD! I started a post on that and then people came, and I don;t now what happened. I was going to write on that...Just give me a PORTION of your spirit.....to see life the way you do!! SO, that was AMAZING! This is cute and funny. SIMPLY YOU! :) HUGS
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Date: 9/11/2013 8:35:00 AM
My dearest Eileen... I look forward every day to hearing your uplifting words no matter how your day has gone! You are a sweetheart Miss Boop... a very very 'special' friend! Warm hugs, Kenny! xoxoxox
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