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Sara's Haiku

male red cardinal sits on rim of cold bird bath... chilled water awaits male red cardinal sleek black feathers around beak.. flies up into tree female cardinal lands on rim of cold bird bath... quickly drinks flies up female cardinal on one side of willow tree.. male on opposite spring a long way off winter's cold here to stay now... survival mode

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  1. Date: 11/25/2012 9:44:00 PM
    Dear Sara,,, love your haiku's... wish you the best surgical kit this winter... your blanket haiku sound promising,,, he he he... ((hope you do not mind my little humor above)) love always~ PD

  1. Date: 11/25/2012 3:43:00 AM
    love it, these ;} ,,, I'll bet you watched this out the window ;}

  1. Date: 11/24/2012 9:18:00 PM
    that's a beautiful Haiku suite, I enjoyed reading it.God bless you. Hugs!Erich

  1. Date: 11/24/2012 7:34:00 PM
    Fabulosity in a gem, gleaming brightly Sara xoxox Carma

  1. Date: 11/24/2012 4:25:00 PM
    lovely Sara,loved it with a passion,getting the hang of Haiku,loving it

  1. Date: 11/24/2012 9:39:00 AM
    a running commentary, on the life of,, and a wonderful way for someone like me, not knowing the red cardinal, to read and to learn...

  1. Date: 11/24/2012 9:12:00 AM
    an interesting take on the winter scene, Sara!! Jag

  1. Date: 11/24/2012 9:09:00 AM
    I really really enjoyed reading these Haiku as the cardinal is probably my favorite bird of all the species of birds! We have them here in the winter too, they are so majestic in their appearance, at least the male ones are very special looking! You poem painted a very specific and lovely picture my friend! I loved reading this delightful and wondrous piece this morning Sara! What a wonderful display of nature you have painted, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 11/24/2012 7:59:00 AM
    Just had our first snowfall... feel like a cardinal! LOL Big hugs, Jack xox

  1. Date: 11/24/2012 7:00:00 AM
    Well written Sara, I like it very much. - Have a relaxed weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)