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BRONZE STONE Along the timeless praise of deep Egyptian sands where old men knew, one favored by the gods and when this stone arose the hymns chimed through dusts for sacred bronze Sphinx Trailing here as my eyes danced in full wonder, breaths heaved temporarily in long wisps a part of me somehow ripped when its face spoke traces of Pharaohs’ myth ‘ ‘’’’’ ‘ Written for Craig Cornish's Guzzically Inspired

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  1. Date: 3/7/2012 2:08:00 PM
    Howdy Nette. I've read this poem through several times and probably will do so several more times as I compose this review. This is a mesmerizing poem with beautifully constructed words. It places the feet of my mind in the sands of Egypt as I visualize the Sphinx before me. I wait for it to ask me the riddle that allows me to pass but the question never comes. Alas. Thanks for making me think Nette.

  1. Date: 3/6/2012 8:04:00 PM
    have always been fascinated by the Sphinx.. now mesmerized by your lines Nette luv.. u aced this difficult challenge and form.. much luck in contest.. luv..

  1. Date: 3/4/2012 8:03:00 PM
    wow! this is the third sapphic poem i read and could safely say amongst the best. beautifully mysterious! good luck on the contest and thanks for stopping by ;)

  1. Date: 3/4/2012 3:05:00 PM
    Beautiful written got the words in your that pen of yours made of Gold or something? smiles..The awesome ending sets my inspiration on fire! Hugss,Arild

  1. Date: 3/4/2012 11:31:00 AM
    another excellently worded poem from you nette.Enjoyed it very much.Best wishes.A soupmail is on way.

  1. Date: 3/4/2012 10:57:00 AM
    Your poems are always above and beyond..this is no exception! (ps..thanks for the heads up on the contest rules. I am grateful for your help! Thanks so much, Nette!!

  1. Date: 3/4/2012 10:04:00 AM
    Nette, You are an inspiration! Thanks. Jay

  1. Date: 3/4/2012 9:14:00 AM
    Nette, I love how you ended this visual beauty.. Wishing you all the best for Craig's contest ;) hope your weekend's been a good one as well!!