Sandy

I had a friend, from long ago We were only young you know She was my best friend At least that's what I thought We did everything together I liked her a lot! But then one day I had to leave for school Though I wish I did not Cause I missed her a lot Then one day I came home When I called out to for her She did not answer me I looked for her high & low! But then I heard one day From the TV news man That she had met 3 bad men And they took her away She is with the angels now For it could not be any other way And I know she waits for me Cause she was always that way !!! I moved away from home, age 16, up to Oregon to get my degree in child psychology & teaching, come home at 18. had a dream that Sandy and I went to a house party "both of us age 18" then she went into another room with 3 men. So I stood there & knocked forever on the door. Sandy never came out. This is a TRUE dream! And yes this ( her missing) was on the news. Two brothers and a cousin killed her.

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Duke Beaufort

Date: 4/17/2017 8:10:00 PM

I am thinking that you had some idea subconsciously that she was in trouble. You were a great friend since you worried about her on all levels. This is a very unusual but very important idea.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/25/2013 2:45:00 PM

hmm, I am confused now. I am seeing a comment you made to Debs, and sounds like this was really true. But at the bottom of your story, it says it was just a dream? did she disappear or is it fiction?

Debbie Duncan
Date: 2/25/2013 6:18:00 PM

Yes, it's true,, I did have the dream ;}

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/25/2013 2:44:00 PM

Good idea doing a poem based on a dream. I have done a few that way. they can be pretty amazing. I enjoyed your story, sweetie.

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 12/5/2012 6:26:00 PM

so sad!! Light & Love

Debbie Duncan
Date: 12/5/2012 8:09:00 PM

Thank you for reading Debbie ,,, Sandy was 18 as was I,,,,,,, when it happened .

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 6/19/2011 6:30:00 AM

No doubt you are correct in that assumption, Debbie. Death does not seperate friends... just puts off the meeting for a spark of time in the eternal order of things. nice tribute to your friend.

Gerard Keogh Jr.

Date: 4/29/2011 7:51:00 PM

God, that is a tough ticket to punch! Wow! You have great faith and I admire you for it. I know that your friend does , too! i am glad that youliked my poem. I am Catholic, too, but, I took a different, but not sacrilegious approach. I am pleased that you like it! Thank you! Gerard. Best wishes.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/29/2011 10:04:00 AM

I enjoyed reading your creative poetry today Debbie. Yes she will be waiting for you. Have a wonderful day and may you find even more inspiration to write as the day goes by. Love, Carol

Poet Tacito

Date: 3/29/2011 5:51:00 AM

*Hug*...that's all I have.

Anthony Nutter

Date: 3/29/2011 2:45:00 AM

Sad write and one day you will see your friend again.