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Salty Sweet Her Taste

salty sweet her taste her forehead, her nose, her lips oh yes the pale lips first the touching and brushing upper, lower and corners salty sweet her taste her sudden ohhh and moaning oh yes the moaning engaging, enveloping engulfing my hungry heart

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Poet. Undertaker

Date: 12/1/2013 9:07:00 AM

fun reading this one Tim.This one brings down your age.Great poem. (: ) Jenish.

Skat A

Date: 11/7/2013 12:00:00 PM

Tim, *nice* SWEET Or SALTY win................... HUGS ~SKAT~

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/6/2013 7:28:00 PM

Tim, Congratulations On your way to xool Sweet & Sour win... always~ Linda aka PD

Nette Onclaud

Date: 11/6/2013 11:39:00 AM

sizzling, tim.. hmm, a deliciously passionate write...happy cheers to you for your win!..:) huggs

Donna Jones

Date: 11/5/2013 10:05:00 PM

Congratulations Tim....

Ilene Bauer

Date: 11/5/2013 9:17:00 AM

great poem! congrats on placing in the contest...

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/5/2013 8:06:00 AM

Time, this was GREAT!! Congrats in my contest. Soupmail.

Kim Van Breda

Date: 10/29/2013 8:51:00 AM

PHEW... got a bit heated reading this :) Great Tanka, and excellent entry for Andrea's contest.

Jack Horne

Date: 10/27/2013 2:12:00 PM

love this sensual write, my friend

Donna Jones

Date: 10/25/2013 11:52:00 AM

Wow Tim....engulfing..now that's a salty and sweet word all by itself....how ya doin?

Eileen Manassian

Date: 10/21/2013 3:16:00 AM

Tim....read this brfore....Overwhelmed!!! Came back to say.....Awesome....beautiful....sensuous.....breathtaking...a winner....hugs

Kathryn Collins

Date: 10/19/2013 11:56:00 AM

Zazzoli

Jack Ellison

Date: 10/18/2013 9:43:00 PM

WOWSERS! My good friend Tim... you outdided yourself with this passionate write! A winner!

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 10/18/2013 5:38:00 PM

Sounds like a great way to get my daily intake of salt!

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 10/18/2013 4:05:00 PM

yikes WOW I need a cold shower! cher what are you doing to the female population of soup! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

Sandra Adams

Date: 10/17/2013 10:00:00 AM

very sensual take on the theme...enjoyed this one from your pen...good luck in the contest :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 10/17/2013 12:25:00 AM

ohhh, tim...this is boh earthy and soulful.. the delicacy of your piece brings out a different flavor that delights the senses... how could anyone top this?... you rule!..:) huggs

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 10/16/2013 9:50:00 PM

Very very salty expressions turning into a sweet one, Timk

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 10/16/2013 9:08:00 PM

Wow, hot stuff, Tim! I'm a little flushed myself. A great entry for the contest...Love and blessings, Rhonda

Carrie Richards

Date: 10/16/2013 8:49:00 PM

OOO LA LA....!! .......felt like is was a peeping Tom !! lol........ you have me blushing for intruding!!

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 10/16/2013 7:15:00 PM

oh and I like the alliteration - I was so distracted by the heat that I only just noticed it! haha

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 10/16/2013 7:13:00 PM

ooh I like this, very sensual! an original and erotic take on the theme, andrea should enjoy this one, good luck in the contest...:)