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Salty Sweet Her Taste

salty sweet her taste
her forehead, her nose, her lips
oh yes the pale lips
first the touching and brushing
upper, lower and corners

salty sweet her taste
her sudden ohhh and moaning
oh yes the moaning
engaging, enveloping
engulfing my hungry heart

Copyright © Tim Ryerson | Year Posted 2013

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Poet. Undertaker Date: 12/1/2013 9:07:00 AM fun reading this one Tim.This one brings down your age.Great poem. (: ) Jenish. Login to Reply

Skat A Date: 11/7/2013 12:00:00 PM Tim, *nice* SWEET Or SALTY win................... HUGS ~SKAT~ Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 11/6/2013 7:28:00 PM Tim, Congratulations On your way to xool Sweet & Sour win... always~ Linda aka PD Login to Reply

Nette Onclaud Date: 11/6/2013 11:39:00 AM sizzling, tim.. hmm, a deliciously passionate write...happy cheers to you for your win!..:) huggs Login to Reply

Donna Jones Date: 11/5/2013 10:05:00 PM Congratulations Tim.... Login to Reply

Ilene Bauer Date: 11/5/2013 9:17:00 AM great poem! congrats on placing in the contest... Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 11/5/2013 8:06:00 AM Time, this was GREAT!! Congrats in my contest. Soupmail. Login to Reply

Kim Van Breda Date: 10/29/2013 8:51:00 AM PHEW... got a bit heated reading this :) Great Tanka, and excellent entry for Andrea's contest. Login to Reply

Jack Horne Date: 10/27/2013 2:12:00 PM love this sensual write, my friend Login to Reply

Donna Jones Date: 10/25/2013 11:52:00 AM Wow Tim....engulfing..now that's a salty and sweet word all by itself....how ya doin? Login to Reply

Eileen Manassian Date: 10/21/2013 3:16:00 AM Tim....read this brfore....Overwhelmed!!! Came back to say.....Awesome....beautiful....sensuous.....breathtaking...a winner....hugs Login to Reply

Kathryn Collins Date: 10/19/2013 11:56:00 AM Zazzoli Login to Reply

Jack Ellison Date: 10/18/2013 9:43:00 PM WOWSERS! My good friend Tim... you outdided yourself with this passionate write! A winner! Login to Reply

Richard Lamoureux Date: 10/18/2013 5:38:00 PM Sounds like a great way to get my daily intake of salt! Login to Reply

Debbie Guzzi Date: 10/18/2013 4:05:00 PM yikes WOW I need a cold shower! cher what are you doing to the female population of soup! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love Login to Reply

Sandra Adams Date: 10/17/2013 10:00:00 AM very sensual take on the theme...enjoyed this one from your pen...good luck in the contest :) Login to Reply

Nette Onclaud Date: 10/17/2013 12:25:00 AM ohhh, tim...this is boh earthy and soulful.. the delicacy of your piece brings out a different flavor that delights the senses... how could anyone top this?... you rule!..:) huggs Login to Reply

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 10/16/2013 9:50:00 PM Very very salty expressions turning into a sweet one, Timk Login to Reply

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders Date: 10/16/2013 9:08:00 PM Wow, hot stuff, Tim! I'm a little flushed myself. A great entry for the contest...Love and blessings, Rhonda Login to Reply

Carrie Richards Date: 10/16/2013 8:49:00 PM OOO LA LA....!! .......felt like is was a peeping Tom !! lol........ you have me blushing for intruding!! Login to Reply

Charlotte Puddifoot Date: 10/16/2013 7:15:00 PM oh and I like the alliteration - I was so distracted by the heat that I only just noticed it! haha Login to Reply

Charlotte Puddifoot Date: 10/16/2013 7:13:00 PM ooh I like this, very sensual! an original and erotic take on the theme, andrea should enjoy this one, good luck in the contest...:) Login to Reply