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The fireplace is warmed with wood the oven smells of all things good and Mother's all begin to spin making costumes, second skins while flying ghost cry, misunderstood. The howl of wind through withered wood the stalwart stand of fir withstood the comforters crocheted within warm the grand children's spindly shins as Grandma reads Red Riding Hood Pine cones snap, as fired they should and scent the sitting room for good The table's set supper will begin the Wolf rubs his chinny-chin-chin and all is well in Autumn's wood.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 10/19/2012 7:10:00 AM
Thanking you today for your comments on my writing Debbie. I hope you have a very pleasant weekend and I wish to see more of your work next week. Love, Carol XXXX
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Date: 10/9/2012 7:22:00 AM
Debbie- This is perfecto -- costumes/ovens all that stuff that scared the heck out of me as a kid. Kings sounds great - breakfast/lunch?. 12:00 o'clock? Meet you at the door? love, Kathy
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Date: 10/8/2012 3:42:00 PM
This sounds like a show mu husband like called Grimm, with Red Riding Hood etc. Like the quintella.
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Debbie Guzzi
Date: 10/8/2012 3:45:00 PM
YEAH!!! I bet it's already permeated me! LOL That and Once Upon A Time! First time with the form, I didn't chose great end rhyme words they were too restrictive..oh well I'll try again!
Date: 10/8/2012 2:59:00 PM
another wonderful gem, from you Debbie, another world, and sound better than this one...
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Date: 10/8/2012 2:55:00 PM
this is a cool form, this quintella. Dont' believe I tried one yet. I like how it went along with the REd riding hood story that was being read to them! Nice.
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