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Sad Festival Night

Dewali night- beyond the fireworks of sky a lonely star always reminding me you are no more dad ========000======== Contest- Sad Holidays Date- 6th December 2013

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Matthew Anish

Date: 1/4/2014 6:12:00 PM

What a sad tale you tell here. It is very poignant. Where is Dewali? Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish

Gautami Phookan

Date: 12/15/2013 1:59:00 PM

My mom said she'll be star for me,, I love her so much. This is a beautiful tribute to your father. I loved this very beautiful work of yours Kashi, gautami

Carrie Richards

Date: 12/12/2013 8:08:00 PM

Oh dear........this hurts my heart. I do understand that same feeling too well, my mother dying at such a young age, and during my impressionable years. I still feel that wrenching sadness. Well said in this poem, Kash. it hurts to know you have experienced this.

Donna Jones

Date: 12/12/2013 4:33:00 PM

Very heartwarming Kash....congratulations

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/12/2013 3:47:00 PM

I had a feeling this was yours, Kash. and I remember you told me of when your dear father passed away. Congrats for your win in my contest. Susan really loves the way you write tanka too.

Monterey Sirak

Date: 12/12/2013 8:25:00 AM

Congrats on your win. Sad, loving emotion abounds in this poem.

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 12/12/2013 6:25:00 AM

Sad kash but you have captured many peoples thoughts here, congratulations xx

Kathryn Collins

Date: 12/9/2013 9:15:00 AM

Hi Kash - There are lonely stars for so many of us. and you say it in such succinct expression. It packs a world of emotion. Kathy

Nette Onclaud

Date: 12/7/2013 2:41:00 PM

awwhh, kashi bud.. you are back.. mellow festival of lights written splendidly with memories of your dad... wow, andie will be glad!.. huggs

Ilene Bauer

Date: 12/6/2013 8:00:00 AM

very poignant and well-written!

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 12/6/2013 6:44:00 AM

Hi kash..This is an emotive tanka which filled my eyes with tears.Andrea is going to love this very unhappy beautiful heart touching tanka..I am.sure.Your dad will always be your guiding star.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 12/6/2013 4:14:00 AM

I appreciate the Smaranjali, Kash

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 12/5/2013 10:15:00 PM

I would like to think he lives on in you. this is a Beautiful tribute.. Im sure he would be proud. BG

Russell Sivey

Date: 12/5/2013 10:07:00 PM

That is truly a sad write my friend, and very well written my friend! I enjoyed reading this amazing poem this evening! What a wonderful piece, Great Work!!