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Sacred Memory

One dark, blustery night with storm clouds thickening I peeked out of my window, but couldn’t see a thing My hands cupped as blinders, and squinting very hard A brilliant flash of lightening lit up a dark graveyard The sky became a lightening show and thunder it did roll Displaying in that graveyard a massive totem pole It boasted such a dignity and stood there as a guard Crested with an eagle that watched the whole graveyard Storm clouds threaten to explode with tears of lament For all buried in that graveyard is to someone heaven sent Dad got back into the car as the angels began to cry We drove from that graveyard under the eagle’s watchful eye Each night before I sleep, lying in my bed With exciting sights of the day dancing in my head The memory I recall the most, the one I can’t discard Is a flat tire on a stormy night, totem pole and graveyard Randy Steele August 13, 2011

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Date: 8/24/2011 9:29:00 AM
A great spooky story with images to delight the mind. I enjoyed reading!
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Date: 8/23/2011 1:41:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement in Francine Roberts' "Totems in the Darkening Sky" contest Randy. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/20/2011 4:24:00 PM
Congratulations on your win! Great job... Caryl Ramsdale
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Date: 8/20/2011 10:18:00 AM
What an experience for a young man..congrats on your win!BG
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Date: 8/20/2011 3:47:00 AM
hey Randy, congrats on your win David
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Date: 8/20/2011 1:53:00 AM
Vividly exciting poem. Congratulations Randy. Joyce
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Date: 8/19/2011 11:57:00 PM
Congrats Randy on your seventh place win in Totem contest.. with this grand write luv..
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Date: 8/19/2011 10:26:00 PM
congrats on your 7th place win in the contest Randy with this spooky tale
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Date: 8/13/2011 5:56:00 PM
Lovely penned write with mystery and awe, Randy
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Date: 8/13/2011 12:28:00 PM
Love this poem Randy,your experience of that night will stay with you forever.
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Date: 8/13/2011 12:08:00 PM
an excellent creative tale Randy ..mysterious nd eerie ..your last verse draws this piece altogether..luv.. good luck in the contest..
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Date: 8/13/2011 11:28:00 AM
Very well written my friend,....enjoyed Michael
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