Runaway Train

Come, my ***** brethren, come.

Come my children, and let me take you away, 
Away from that sad, sad struggle in the South 
To your human rights of freedom in the North.

Come, my ***** brethren, come.

Slavery is a sin that will not go unpunished, 
And like Moses I will guide you safely from your
Phony Pharaohs to a prosperous promised land.

Come, my ***** brethren, come.

We are not beasts of their burdens!  But, a
Proud people who will not be whisked 
And walloped anymore by their wild whips.  

Come, my ***** brethren, come.

There is one of two glorious gifts you have the
Inherent right to: liberty or death, if you could 
Not have one you can certainly have the other.

Come, my ***** brethren, come.

The ride is long, cold and exhausting.  We travel 
Under the blanket of night guided by a heavenly 
Star sitting quietly in the silent Northern sky.   

Come, my ***** brethren, come.

You will find rest and hide during the day. 
I have carried many others this way
Not a one lost, not a one led astray.

Come, my ***** brethren, come.

Saturday is upon us and it is time to catch
Your train. For today is the day the Lord hath
Made.  Freedom is upon us—first, let us pray.

Come my ***** brethren, come.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010


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Date: 5/19/2010 2:01:00 PM
Thank you for your comments and I will think about them and may make a change or two. I like this poem a lot, it tells a story. I had a great grandfather who ran an underground railroad thru Kentucky. I like the rhythm and the structure. I stumble a little at the liberty or death stanza one or the other, not sure why, but this is great and makes me think of what that was like. Thank you
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Date: 5/18/2010 10:20:00 AM
It was a pleasure to read your poetry this morning Mike. I hope you have a wonderful day filled with inspiration. Love,Carol
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Date: 5/18/2010 10:00:00 AM
I really enjoyed this powerful peace. You write with a lot of pride and conviction. Keep up the good work.
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Date: 5/18/2010 4:34:00 AM
The repetitive sentence gives good rhythm to the journey. Good luck
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