Get Your Premium Membership

Ruins Rise

bone like trees line streets of Hiroshima sentinels, scratching the sky, winter clipped memories ... life from death arose springing eternally up rooting ever down often bubbling forth from ruins shadowing the beggar’s bride who spits on the graves but mad men dance and war on bone tree remind us *kimo, tanka, senryu

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 7/1/2013 10:17:00 PM
A GOOD WINNING VERSE ................ GOODNIGHT *SKAT
Login to Reply
Date: 6/28/2013 7:59:00 PM
I like seeing ones that mention this great tragedy of history. WEll done, Debs, Congrats on your win. One of the better ones.
Login to Reply
Date: 6/28/2013 2:19:00 PM
Debbie this blended very well. Congratulations on your win. Warm Smiles, Connie
Login to Reply
Date: 6/28/2013 9:11:00 AM
My, I would have placed this one much higher! I learn so much from your poetry, Debbie - especially shorter, Japanese style poems. Your kimo gave me goosebumps. Congrats!
Login to Reply
Date: 6/28/2013 8:23:00 AM
Beautiful. Congrats on your win
Login to Reply
Date: 6/28/2013 6:15:00 AM
congrats. really an excellent write
Login to Reply
Date: 6/27/2013 9:10:00 PM
Excellent written. Congratz on your win, Debz :)
Login to Reply
Date: 6/27/2013 1:07:00 PM
Well said Debbie. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
Login to Reply
Date: 6/21/2013 1:56:00 PM
and a ps......my gratitude that you found my poem to fit your "being" To Be" contest requirements.......wasn't sure if it were to subtle...or too vague.......but it was a hard one to write, in the sense it was based on, or from one of the darkest nights I have experienced, ever. .Accepting what was unacceptable.....can be and is the most difficult task. Thank you for this honor!
Login to Reply
Date: 6/21/2013 1:51:00 PM
Wow......heavy......laden with so much shameful history, but so brilliantly shaped into these three outstanding poems, ...united into one amazing testament. Not sure which I would pick as my favorite.....all the above......!!!
Login to Reply
Date: 6/18/2013 11:38:00 PM
i love your poem and you. i will be following your poems
Login to Reply
Date: 6/18/2013 11:36:00 PM
nice.sense like a moderate shouting at war. afterall poetry is a quest for peace and love.
Login to Reply
Date: 6/17/2013 9:27:00 AM
Beautiful! You are amazing at writing.
Login to Reply
Date: 6/16/2013 2:39:00 PM
Powerful words-the imagery GRAND!!! I feel this one!!!Congrats!!
Login to Reply

Book: Reflection on the Important Things