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 this is a poem my daughter savannah wrote 
to me when she was 5, she is now 15.....and 
i have it in a frame on my nightstand.


         i love my daddy

       he smells like roses

       he is so handsome

         when he poses


     i love my dad so much


   by savannah leigh green

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  1. Date: 12/28/2011 6:28:00 PM
    rereading this one. Such a delight.

  1. Date: 12/27/2011 10:49:00 PM
    Hello, John...how are you? Better yet how are the holidays treating you? I'm ok..a but busy with my blogs... And trying to accomplish two masterpiece poems before the year ends.... Roses are my favorite icon ever... Love the comment I left on the bottom... And about my coffee poem...lol.. No I don't drink it... He he,he... Can you imagine me..adhd.. Thanks for your comment as always... P.d

  1. Date: 12/22/2011 3:53:00 PM
    YOU SMELL LIKE ROSES???? Then there is something very WRONG with you!! ha ha. I am totally kidding. This is sweet and warming. It says much that you framed it and placed where you rest your head each day...you must be one thankful DAD! ......Gwendolen

  1. Date: 12/10/2011 10:55:00 PM
    this is so sweet. She was only five when she wrote this? My gosh, if she is still writing, she must be incredible by now!

  1. Date: 7/10/2011 9:06:00 PM
    What a delightful verse. Your little one must be very special!

  1. Date: 7/10/2011 8:41:00 PM
    What a delightful verse. Your little one must be very special!

  1. Date: 6/24/2011 12:04:00 AM
    CooL one from the Little one!

  1. Date: 5/29/2011 3:19:00 PM
    * “Sooo Sweeet * I Absolutely Love & Simply Adore * The Fragrant Delight of Lovely Roses * Smile * Dear Precious & Sweeet John. * Tis A Special Spirit to Held Amid Such Admiration & Love. * Lovely * Thanks for Making Me Smile With Your Perfumed Coms * Very Kind * Beautiful Poem * Sincerely Yours * Sarah” *

  1. Date: 5/28/2011 8:34:00 AM
    this is cute.. check out my daughters first poem. cory

  1. Date: 5/27/2011 4:08:00 PM
    She did a great job John. I know it touched your heart:)

  1. Date: 5/27/2011 3:40:00 PM
    John you must be so proud of this sweet child of yours. You and Savannah are very lucky to have a bond so great . I can feel the love . Superb Savannah . Anne

  1. Date: 5/26/2011 7:09:00 PM
    My daughter is so shy, she said she was mad at me for posting it,,lol, i want her to post on P.S. because,,, i know she is a great poem writer,,,thank you so much my friends for the kind comments about roses,,my daughter and i had so much fun reading them...she could not believe it..........you guys rock.....

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    Date: 5/26/2011 7:11:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    and you should of seen her face,,i almost cried it was so amazing...
  1. Date: 5/26/2011 11:14:00 AM
    I'm smiling at Your Savannah... a wonderful poem to share with us, john... I don't think my daddy smelled like roses... But, i did write him a roses are red and why is my daddy blue poem one time.... You never know what we think once we get are rhyming going on.... This is a wonderful treasure to share with us... take care,..p.d.

  1. Date: 5/26/2011 7:47:00 AM
    oh so sweet when children do these lovely gestures to parents.. my sons have always written beautiful things to me as well John.. a refreshing and delightful read ..from a sweetie pie.. hope u enjoy a happy holiday weekend ..be safe luv..

  1. Date: 5/26/2011 5:50:00 AM
    John, I can't help but smile. Now this is a poem worth keeping! Keep it near your heart and framed, read it every night with a blomming smile. And say "I can't believe I smelled like a roses." (J.K.) A lovely treasure for any father.. Have a lovely day ~luv*SKAT

  1. Date: 5/26/2011 4:45:00 AM
    a 'rose budding' poet in the making, taking after her father no doubt, sweet :-)