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Rollercoaster of this thing we label as an " Love Life"

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Rollercoaster of this thing we label as an " Love Life"

Your love life goes up and down. You find a person that's so great, loving and everything
you ever wanted but distance causing him to push you away. But you can't understand, your
heart that is. Your heart is having a hard time dealing with the fact that, a person who
once said they loved you, now doesn't want anything to do with you. Pain seeps in your
heart like water into a paper towel. Your mind see's it as one strike for this thing
called " L O V E." 

You find a man with the same zodiac sign, beautiful personality...just an all around good
guy, it seems like. This is until you find him with another woman and he swears up and
down it was her. Second strike for " L O V E."

Next, you think you have found your soulmate. But he isn't so perfect when you find out
he's such an liar.

Plain and simple. Love takes time and patience. We're so quick to exchange the words " I
love you", when you haven't even met his parents or anything. Slow down, your turn for
love will defiantly come.

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  1. Date: 7/21/2009 8:37:00 PM
    Yeah, very strong feelings for this poem. Thanks for the comments.

  1. Date: 7/21/2009 4:05:00 PM
    I like your mood. Sounds like you have strong feelings, vent to this community... Hopefully we can help....Good write.....:JP)

  1. Date: 7/21/2009 11:12:00 AM
    like the thoughts, well thought through. wish i had your optimism!