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Rollercoaster Mind

My Mind Melts Orange Scattering butterflies Singing with iridescent Chameleons First aqua green, then Revolution Clubbing twilight with both Fists, gulped by gallons Of planets Parading As thoughtless trees Overbearing junipers Crowding the galaxy With shrinking Wisdom Unafraid of red Ants Colonizing advanced Mountaintops Millions Of miles Inside My Mind 08/08/13 © All Rights Reserved

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Sandra Adams

Date: 8/22/2013 8:58:00 PM

your mind is filled with colorful images, thank for letting us see those colors come to life so beautifully...enjoyed the read :)

Rachel W

Date: 8/22/2013 10:05:00 AM

The window into your mind is very colourful! I like it :) Cheers, Rachel

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/14/2013 2:55:00 PM

Ahhh!! Enjoyed reading this one today..Sara

Eileen Manassian

Date: 8/12/2013 1:21:00 PM

Jimbo....the title drew me in....my mind...and emotions on this ride....Colorful write... :-D

Harry Horsman

Date: 8/12/2013 10:23:00 AM

Jimbo this is amazing poetry,,,

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/12/2013 10:02:00 AM

jimbo, a burst of images puzzling and enticing.. what a whirlwind of a piece.... racishing!..:) huggs

Christine Phillips

Date: 8/12/2013 8:32:00 AM

I like the different imagery circulating throughout this poem. The arrangement of words adds to the inner meaning of this poem. "millions of miles inside my mind" very strong and beautiful ending

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 8/10/2013 5:41:00 AM

morning Jimbo! Refreshing! Just as your writing always is! BIG HUGS! Light & Love

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/9/2013 5:42:00 PM

hey is this for the unusual pattern of free verse contest? If not, it should be. It really rocks!

Dom- X-

Date: 8/9/2013 1:51:00 PM

amazing. DX

Cherie Thomas

Date: 8/9/2013 11:00:00 AM

Love your creativity & energy...awesome write!!! I felt transported into this vivid cosmic, place...ty4sharing jimbo really enjoyed your thoughts today:0) cherie...

Jack Ellison

Date: 8/9/2013 10:10:00 AM

Brilliant my friend! One of the best I've seen from you... to my special poems list! Take care!

Poet Tacito

Date: 8/9/2013 9:16:00 AM

Your heart ran wild on this one. I understand the rollercoaster in this piece. Fantastic lines!

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 8/9/2013 1:07:00 AM

I love the way your mind scatter butterflies in such a world of red ants.Maybe we should all travel the journey of miles within your mind..Maybe then We can.reach the peak of evergreen and blossoming colours..A very beautiful poem which flows against the dirt covering this haven

Kim Merryman

Date: 8/8/2013 9:27:00 PM

A very imaginative and creative write, Jim! A very colorful mind you have! Love, Kim