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River of Love

In the dark of night on the edge of sleep when rivers of doubt flow into the streams of self esteem a lace of light will remind me to spread my dreams with fresh insight -- I cannot share my love if I lose sight of loving me
________________________________________ For Dana Smith's Contest:"Love Yourself"

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 8/9/2013 6:21:00 PM
This is filled with much truth and well written.Loved it Carrie.
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Date: 8/3/2013 4:45:00 AM
I dare not trouble you with anything less than 7.
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Date: 7/23/2013 11:56:00 PM
For me, this is the best one I think I have seen. this is what I had wanted to say but I was unable to be this creative so I did it a different way and a different theme!!
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Date: 7/23/2013 10:06:00 PM
Wonderful piece and you are absolutely right. :)
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Date: 7/23/2013 8:22:00 AM
Precisely!!!! So, so many forget that. They dedicate all of their heart to another, without valuing their own first. Excellent reminder that all need to keep in mind!
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