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Below is the poem entitled River which was written by poet Patrick Farley IV. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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This river takes a break
it spills downstream
to go relax in a lake.
this river has bends,
logs, and slippery rocks
untill it ends.
this river has a thunder
earthly power bellows loud
and shakes the world from under.
this river doesn't judge
it runs with no offence
it runs simply just because!
so respect this river,
this river gives life
through the water it delivers.

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  1. Date: 10/17/2012 1:17:00 PM
    Nice piece! Love the wordplay and the imagery!

    Farley IV Avatar Patrick Farley IV
    Date: 10/18/2012 4:40:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you! I'm glad you liked it.