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Below is the poem entitled Ripples which was written by poet Shawn Sackman. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Under the sufrace
a Fall stream elk hair caddis erupts
Fish leaps, ripples again

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  1. Date: 11/22/2010 11:43:00 AM
    Many congrats on your feature this week Rgds Janette

  1. Date: 11/22/2010 11:19:00 AM
    Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Shawn. Love,Carol

  1. Date: 12/6/2009 3:24:00 PM
    Love this one for the descriptiveness. I don't know what a elk hair caddis is but I can just see the rest. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara

  1. Date: 9/8/2009 1:19:00 AM
    Nice use of imagery...Raul