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Riding in the Rain

Rode over to visit a friend today, she paints with colors in the most lovelest of ways. no 
charcoal or water with color, just oils on a canvas. she allows me to watch. word-less i stay 
for hours sitting in a point she turns to say,what color should this be? look at the 
color of what you wish to paint,this is the color of it should be.she coolly turns away.
so a sun-shine rain begins it's windy spray upon this paint-able summers day.we cover the 
canvas in a most coveted shelter we dash.
so i mount my bike from which i came cycling home,riding in the rain.
return i will another day,perhaps it won't rain,upon this other day...

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  1. Date: 2/10/2011 8:33:00 AM
    great imagery. Big congrats to you dear friend on your wonderful piece being featured this week. Please keep carving creative castles with your passionate pen! Wishing you many more features & all the best with your writing endeavour. Love always, Adeleke

  1. Date: 2/9/2011 9:18:00 AM
    Congrats on your feature this week Gary. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 2/6/2011 6:19:00 PM
    Congrats Gary on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. a great one to share with us all with luv my friend... hope all is well..luv..

  1. Date: 7/23/2010 7:16:00 AM
    Reads like a damper was placed upon your otherwise lovely day...Rain is good for we need it for all the earth to be healthy including us..I especially enjoyed this work so expressive and descriptive..Keep the creative pen flowing...Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara

  1. Date: 7/22/2010 3:58:00 PM
    Today as I read this piece you have written I am thankful that you have shared it with us. I hope you will present us with more of your poetry in the near future. Don't let your ink dry out. I wish you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be Gary. Love, Carol