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Riding Horses With Dad

I weave through the rocks of a rough winding trail Up through the boulders and sage Following a ridge to the top of the hill I'm a young girl, who's coming of age I am sitting astride a strawberry roan My Dad rides ahead in the haze Climbing the crest, they're sure-footed, and know of a place to take rest, where the horses can graze The clouds pass over, like ships setting sail Casting shadows on the valleys below The sky wears a palette of rose colored, pale Our pace resumes, quiet and slow Our voices are silent, all our words have been said Just a whisper of bird wings, and a wisp of the chill Our thoughts take our eyes, to a sun, scarlet red Where it soon disappears, far over the hills My Dad goes ahead, and has taken the lead Lost in a mist, my eyes try to see My mare tries to follow, and everything blurs We continue our climb, to reach forest timber Are those voices I hear, or just birds in the air? Up he goes on the trail, on his faithful old steed, like a dream fading into the clouds.. He is smiling, my Dad,.. on his red sorrel mare, .......while I stay behind to remember _________________________________________________ 6/19/2009

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Date: 6/10/2015 5:22:00 PM
I see the very rich memory here Carrie many warm wishes on its placing..'
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Date: 6/9/2015 11:52:00 AM
CARRIE. Congratulations on your awesome win. HUGS **SKAT**
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Date: 6/9/2015 9:29:00 AM
such wonderful memories Carrie a delight to read your beautiful poem - congrats on your win:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 6/9/2015 9:08:00 AM
Very inspiring and beautiful poem my friend. Memories are the greatest treasure we may have of those taken from us. Congrats on your win my friend. A7
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Date: 6/8/2015 10:33:00 PM
Memories to cherish, and what better way to record them in this wonderful poem... Congrats Carrie :)
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Date: 6/8/2015 8:35:00 PM
always sad for those left behind Carrie a fine tribute congrats on placing hugshugs
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Date: 3/13/2014 5:39:00 PM
This gave me goose pimples in the final verses. You were painting such a loving picture. But I know you have lovely memories. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 3/13/2014 12:52:00 PM
loving remembrances of your dad, carrie.. it's the year of the horse!.. sweet congrats on your well-deserved award!.. huggs
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Date: 3/13/2014 5:10:00 AM
Enjoyed the emotional write and congrats on the fine win, carrie
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Date: 3/13/2014 3:10:00 AM
Congratulations my dear friend Carrie . Thank you so much for your full support! Biggest hugs! Love lots, Leonora
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Date: 5/14/2013 3:19:00 PM
I should have commented on this one two years ago. I know you better now, and I know that some of your fondest memories are of riding with your father. He would like this tribute as much as the rest of us. What a beautiful ending!
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Date: 5/14/2013 3:24:00 AM
'My dream fading into the clouds' and 'No words are spoken, they have all been said'...Two of many of my fav lines in this haunting beauty...Congrats my friend! - Tim
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Date: 5/11/2013 8:49:00 PM
great write and win....congrats
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Date: 5/11/2013 5:03:00 PM
A fabulous image you have conveyed in your dream poem. Congratulations Carrie. A well deserved win. Warm Smiles, Connie
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Date: 5/11/2013 12:55:00 AM
Carrie this memory/dream has made me speechless. Congrats...Seren
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Date: 5/10/2013 9:47:00 PM
love the good memories.congrats on a well deserve win.
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Date: 4/10/2012 1:10:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in P.D's "Emotional" contest Carrie. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/10/2012 12:14:00 PM
carrie congrats on your win,very moving ..David
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Date: 4/10/2012 10:27:00 AM
congrats on your win cory
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Date: 4/10/2012 10:11:00 AM
Carrie, congratulations with your emotional poem! Thank you very much for sharing something so emotional with us. Some poems, are tough to express and share out in the open. God Bless. Always~ PD
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Date: 6/28/2011 1:27:00 PM
Carrie, Great to see you in the winner circle friend. Agape, Moses
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Date: 6/26/2011 1:11:00 AM
Sweet remembrances from those childhood days..Loved this write of you as a lil' girl riding with your dad.. Congrats Carrie on your win and for this beautiful composition . love, gautami
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Date: 6/23/2011 9:04:00 PM
"He is smiling, my Dad,.. on his sorrel brown .......And I stay behind to remember" What a nostalgic last line...from a real born poetess...Congratulations on your wonderful, as usual, poem! Love, your friend, iolanda Giddy-up! :)
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Date: 6/23/2011 8:12:00 PM
the last line is astounding, Wonderful as always, Carrie.How many exceptional poems like these do you now have in your collection?
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Date: 6/23/2011 4:27:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Carrie. Excellent piece. Nice going. xxxRalph
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