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Rhinestone Light

the rising sun leans on shoulders of mountaintops beside a curved lake--- roulette of bluebirds ascend burning tan from rhinestone light in late afternoon trees shade dizzy,dizzy leaves coiled from heated glint--- petals gaily romp to play with rings of sunshine’s last twirls Leonora Galinta's Tanka Crazy--Sunshine Contest by nette onclaud

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/30/2012 11:39:00 AM

Congratulations on your winning poem in "Sunshine" contest. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Stephen Parker

Date: 10/30/2012 9:10:00 AM

Love the personification of nature in this poem. It annimates the natural world in a scintillating manner! Congratulations on your conquest of the tanka!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/29/2012 8:31:00 PM

Nette..:-), CONGRATULATIONS :-) with your awesome poem in Leonora's "Tanka Crazy - Sunshine" contest. Have yourself a sweet night * Luv~PD

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/29/2012 2:53:00 PM

what a great image. Love that line dizzy dizzy leaves. So nice to see this one now on the winners list. Congrats, Nette

Cyndi Macmillan

Date: 10/29/2012 1:10:00 PM

So pretty, so perfect. Roulette. OH BRILLIANT. Will send soupie(s!!!) tonight. We're preparing for Sandy. 70-100km winds, rain AND SNOW?!? Awk! Over 70% of Ontarians are expected to lose electricity for an estimated 72 hours if the powerlines start to go. If you don't hear from me, it's cause I'm power-less. Pun? :) Love, Cyndi

Vicky Tsiluma

Date: 10/29/2012 12:38:00 PM

Just beautiful Nette! Congrats on your win!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 10/29/2012 10:57:00 AM

CONGRATS NETTE LUV ON A EXCITING WRITE AND WELL DESERVED WIN .. WISH WE HAD SOME RHINESTONE LIGHT TO CHASE 'SANDY' AWAY ..

Tanya Harrington

Date: 10/29/2012 10:50:00 AM

Congrats! Just love your way with words Nette! :) Tanya

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 10/29/2012 9:54:00 AM

Big congratulations nette xx

Carrie Richards

Date: 10/29/2012 8:54:00 AM

This is a beauty!! Congrats Nette...a lovely Tanka!

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 10/29/2012 8:00:00 AM

A wild ride as awlays poetic animation! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/29/2012 5:36:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Leonora's "Tanka Crazy-Sunshine" contest Nette. Love, Carol

Len Gasun

Date: 10/29/2012 5:35:00 AM

Congratulations Nette for winning 1st Place in my contest “Crazy Sunshine”. You filled me up with so much happiness while reading your splendid poem. Thank you so much for your full support . May the sun shines in your life always. Love/hug, Leonora

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 10/17/2012 8:59:00 AM

Hi nette! "Rhinestone light"-- I really like that you captured sunshine in a different light here ;) I pass by here and there -- medyo na-busy eh...ikaw, kamusta? I hope all is well! hugs!

Kash Poet

Date: 10/16/2012 1:34:00 AM

:))))))

Kash Poet

Date: 10/13/2012 10:19:00 AM

Where???

Matthew Anish

Date: 10/13/2012 8:12:00 AM

Beautiful natrual scene here! Well crafted, too! Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 10/12/2012 10:17:00 AM

SIMPLY ELEGANT NETTE LUV .. GRAND TITLE FOR CONTEST ACCENTED WITH DYNAMIC WORD FLOW .. WINNING WISHES TO U ..

Kash Poet

Date: 10/12/2012 8:54:00 AM

Such rich in imagery...amazing!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/12/2012 12:00:00 AM

simply lovely and enchanting. A sure win.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/11/2012 1:25:00 PM

A new treasure basis of your "treasure chest" - Thank you for sharing your treasures Nette. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)

Rachel St.Cross

Date: 10/11/2012 12:59:00 PM

‡ Short Sweet And Enchanting. Tis Good To Behold One Of The Gifted As Beautiful Poetess' My Eyes Have Ever Beheld. And Yes I Do Find Much More Than Meets One's Open View Betwixt A Fairy Tales Lines. You Are So Gifted And Beautiful Nette. Lovely. Love, Rachel ‡

Russell Sivey

Date: 10/11/2012 12:56:00 PM

Wow, Nette, you amazed me yet again with this jewel of a write! I really enjoyed this harmonious and delightful poem my friend! What a wondrous piece, very descriptive as usual Nette, a natural wonder! Awesome write, Great Work!!