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Rhapsody of Monsoon

As I walked down the street Under the over clouded sky, Hearing Zeus pound his fist: Making me question myself “Why”? Why did I take on my little sis? Who forgot her little scarf Forcing me to scamper like a mice True to his promise came to drops Forcing me to break a smile, Drops that fell from the haze Like new flour from a mill The little droplets stuck on my face A gift to earth from the sky Leaking from a large dark case. Like my mum hugging me My shirt stuck to my body fast Sending a chill in to me Walking me to a world of past A world of new life green and vast Like a ship with a very huge mass Pushing in to a whole new light.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 1/18/2016 2:54:00 PM
Tom, Awesome write, Thank You for sharing... SKAT...
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Date: 6/4/2011 2:44:00 PM
Lovely and interesting expressions on rhapsody of monsoon, Tom
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Date: 6/3/2011 4:55:00 PM
welcome to poetry soup , very well written, I really enjoyed it
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Date: 6/3/2011 5:20:00 AM
Welcome to poetry soup. interesting poem, theres a few loose ends, but over all quite good.
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Date: 6/3/2011 4:21:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Tom. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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