Rhapsody

Bird of song, you trill Fine tunes that refill; a piping of serenade upon bright treetops… while I, in awe, stop along dewy bend of glade. Glum near a mountain from a heartbreak’s strain, till wings of rhapsody bring an awakened flight… Lo! My breaths delight in your dawn-chant of healing! Dr.Ram's Alouette Contest by nette onclaud
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014


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Date: 8/23/2014 1:00:00 PM
Wonderfully penned, Nette. I think yours is one of the best. Congrats for your win.
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Date: 8/23/2014 7:49:00 AM
Beautiful dawn-chant of healing! :) love that line. grats on your win sweetie
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Date: 8/22/2014 10:24:00 PM
lovely rhapsody and healing through nature, Nette. congrats. Mohan
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Date: 8/22/2014 6:31:00 PM
Lovely, Nette....favorite line "along dewy bend of glade." Congratulations.
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Date: 8/22/2014 10:14:00 AM
This poem sails on wings....and takes us with it ! Lovely once again !!
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Date: 8/22/2014 8:02:00 AM
stunning imagery as ever nette many congratulations on this wonderful poem:-) Hugs jan xxx
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Date: 8/22/2014 6:01:00 AM
Thanks for the entry and my congrats on your 2nd Place win, nette
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Date: 8/1/2014 1:50:00 PM
there is nothing more harmonic than songs of birds. You did a darn good job of stereophonically bringing the grooves to our ears here. ANd to answer your question>No Neete you are nothing like the Black white girl I dated, Her soul was black, though many thought I was being racist or something...who knows. I know my intention. I am fortunate to have you reading my poems and to be able to hear yours. Please do keep corresponding with me on our journey through creativity....Thank you sooo much!
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Date: 7/18/2014 3:03:00 PM
love this inspiring write, my friend x
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Date: 7/18/2014 2:03:00 PM
A truly uplifting write Nette!
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Date: 7/17/2014 4:50:00 PM
This poem itself is a beautiful serenade of verse and imagery. You really painted this poetic artwork...amazing write!
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Date: 7/17/2014 3:54:00 PM
A lovely serenade nette...hugs Tim
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Date: 7/17/2014 12:36:00 PM
Whoa, you pulled this one with such ease and grace. Today, you are my melody, Nette
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Date: 7/17/2014 11:00:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your very descriptive and expressive work..If for a contest reads like a winner to me..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Date: 7/17/2014 8:49:00 AM
Wow love this one Nette ! Awakened flight to breaths delight,, enchanting powerful words there!
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Date: 7/17/2014 8:46:00 AM
that is one fine rhapsody. I love hearing them sing, Nette. This looks like maybe for some challenge here at Soup? I will have to go see!!
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Date: 7/17/2014 8:32:00 AM
One of your sweetest, Nette. You are a powerful poetess. I'm enthralled
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Date: 7/17/2014 7:29:00 AM
There is indeed healing that comes from emearsing ourselves in nature. Well expressed Nette.
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Date: 7/17/2014 6:23:00 AM
Sublime melody from your pen that spills rebirth and glory. Thank you again Nette for believing in me.
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Date: 7/17/2014 5:55:00 AM
Loved this from start to finish I can hear the birdsong in my head and happiness being restored to my life Nette. Hugs Jan xxx
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