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Bird of song, you trill Fine tunes that refill; a piping of serenade upon bright treetops… while I, in awe, stop along dewy bend of glade. Glum near a mountain from a heartbreak’s strain, till wings of rhapsody bring an awakened flight… Lo! My breaths delight in your dawn-chant of healing! Dr.Ram's Alouette Contest by nette onclaud

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  1. Date: 8/23/2014 1:00:00 PM
    Wonderfully penned, Nette. I think yours is one of the best. Congrats for your win.

  1. Date: 8/23/2014 7:49:00 AM
    Beautiful dawn-chant of healing! :) love that line. grats on your win sweetie

  1. Date: 8/22/2014 10:24:00 PM
    lovely rhapsody and healing through nature, Nette. congrats. Mohan

  1. Date: 8/22/2014 6:31:00 PM
    Lovely, Nette....favorite line "along dewy bend of glade." Congratulations.

  1. Date: 8/22/2014 10:14:00 AM
    This poem sails on wings....and takes us with it ! Lovely once again !!

  1. Date: 8/22/2014 8:02:00 AM
    stunning imagery as ever nette many congratulations on this wonderful poem:-) Hugs jan xxx

  1. Date: 8/22/2014 6:01:00 AM
    Thanks for the entry and my congrats on your 2nd Place win, nette

  1. Date: 8/1/2014 1:50:00 PM
    there is nothing more harmonic than songs of birds. You did a darn good job of stereophonically bringing the grooves to our ears here. ANd to answer your question>No Neete you are nothing like the Black white girl I dated, Her soul was black, though many thought I was being racist or something...who knows. I know my intention. I am fortunate to have you reading my poems and to be able to hear yours. Please do keep corresponding with me on our journey through creativity....Thank you sooo much!

  1. Date: 7/18/2014 3:03:00 PM
    love this inspiring write, my friend x

  1. Date: 7/18/2014 2:03:00 PM
    A truly uplifting write Nette!

  1. Date: 7/17/2014 4:50:00 PM
    This poem itself is a beautiful serenade of verse and imagery. You really painted this poetic artwork...amazing write!

  1. Date: 7/17/2014 4:17:00 PM
    The birdsong in the dawn, what a wonderful melody and what a wonderful poem you have written about it Nette....Beautiful poem....peter

  1. Date: 7/17/2014 3:54:00 PM
    A lovely serenade nette...hugs Tim

  1. Date: 7/17/2014 12:36:00 PM
    Whoa, you pulled this one with such ease and grace. Today, you are my melody, Nette

  1. Date: 7/17/2014 11:00:00 AM
    Enjoyed reading your very descriptive and expressive work..If for a contest reads like a winner to me..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

  1. Date: 7/17/2014 8:49:00 AM
    Wow love this one Nette ! Awakened flight to breaths delight,, enchanting powerful words there!

  1. Date: 7/17/2014 8:46:00 AM
    that is one fine rhapsody. I love hearing them sing, Nette. This looks like maybe for some challenge here at Soup? I will have to go see!!

  1. Date: 7/17/2014 8:46:00 AM
    The unexpected song is quite possibly the sweetest.. Your simple poem, perfectly written, has depth that goes on..

  1. Date: 7/17/2014 8:32:00 AM
    One of your sweetest, Nette. You are a powerful poetess. I'm enthralled

  1. Date: 7/17/2014 7:29:00 AM
    There is indeed healing that comes from emearsing ourselves in nature. Well expressed Nette.