Revitalized Love In the Fall of Winter

In the midst of vacant hours, echoes of expressions on opposite ends
are something of the same. Ruminating on questions; questions about
thy and questions about thou intertwined
with the then and the now. Thoughts
prelude to other thoughts of 
thoughts emerging to 
many thoughts.
Consulting and
considering 
the death
and birth
of us; is thy
disinclined 
to shed the 
events upon the
ground transformed
from a dream out of a
dream to this dream only of us?
A coherent argument it is, that the
memories back on yesterday brought us 
here today...But, when thy and thou bodies
meet and descend upon each accreting to the singular; occupancy
quickly overcomes vacancy leading the thoughts of many thoughts effaced.
(Sigh)...Thy and Thou love bolsters all the more today than back on yesterday.


Pace, G
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12-11-2012

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 6/9/2014 7:46:00 AM
Another wonderful gem from your pen! Kindest regards.
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Date: 6/23/2013 2:35:00 AM
very well done on this free verse ,,,,, I thank you for reading my Pitch Perfect Dreams. you have a great day ;}
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Date: 3/4/2013 6:17:00 PM
WOW.............A coherent argument it is, that the memories back on yesterday brought us here today.........That line alone tells an entire story........
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Date: 2/27/2013 2:09:00 PM
I enjoyed your verse this afternoon. Light & Love
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Date: 2/24/2013 6:38:00 AM
Wow excellent metaphoric poem poet. Very good poetry
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Date: 2/23/2013 7:46:00 AM
Pace, a superb write and very clever, well done...David
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Date: 2/20/2013 11:50:00 AM
Magnificent
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Date: 2/4/2013 3:08:00 PM
wonderful flowing poetry, with meaning..love this Pace...
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Date: 2/2/2013 2:35:00 PM
This is the bomb I love this! Interesting title and amazing presentation of a satisfactory chapter of romantically pleasant thoughts, memories and outcomes. It feels good reading this and it felt even better to read it again <3
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Date: 2/2/2013 7:03:00 AM
keep going Super Ink,great write,love it
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Date: 2/1/2013 11:14:00 AM
Wow, what a creative piece! I really enjoyed this one.
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Date: 1/31/2013 6:50:00 AM
I love the play on words, this piece just rolls off the tongue! and I love the title, Good piece! -Beastboy
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Date: 1/28/2013 3:04:00 PM
Very wonderful write, love Elizabeth
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Date: 1/23/2013 9:44:00 PM
Simply beautiful. The best poems are ones that take you to a next place in your mind. Yours did that for me.
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Date: 1/22/2013 10:59:00 AM
Love this poem...skat
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Date: 12/28/2012 6:10:00 AM
Every day we honor our heritage by our actions...nice, Pace! jimbo
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Date: 12/27/2012 5:50:00 PM
This is a beautiful write with a great flow. Thanks for sharing with us. Lucilla
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Date: 12/25/2012 5:24:00 PM
Thoughts that are deep can lead to great insights..I hope that you came up with some that answered your questions..I like the idea that God is there when we are knitted together in our mother's womb and that He is in charge of the knitting..Great work that you have penned...Sara
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Date: 12/23/2012 10:58:00 AM
A quick visit to your nice poem,Pace,G. - Wishing you a peaceful and happy Christmas! <3 - / / I'm sending you a big Christmas hug!! Anne-Lise :) - / /
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Date: 12/21/2012 9:31:00 PM
Thank you for the nice comment on my poem.. your poems are still amazing... so impressive. always~pd
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Date: 12/21/2012 12:11:00 PM
Dang G. what a write..you are a truly creative poet! Thank you for sharing :)
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Date: 12/21/2012 11:35:00 AM
Nice and cleverly done Pace, awesome xx
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Date: 12/20/2012 3:44:00 PM
Damn this is totally awesome! I could never do something like this. I am stuck in a rut.............. rhyme is my game.
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Date: 12/19/2012 8:19:00 PM
Another beaut I must say...Thanks for stopping by,or I would haven't caught this one till who knows when? ha,ha. :o) Pen in hand~Stick to the plan~Words roll out~Like you know they can~~~~~~
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Date: 12/19/2012 3:31:00 PM
Very good write I loved the feel it gave mme thank you for sharing your friend Nita
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