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Revitalized Love in the Fall of Winter

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Revitalized Love in the Fall of Winter

In the midst of vacant hours, echoes of expressions on opposite ends
are something of the same. Ruminating on questions; questions about
thy and questions about thou intertwined
with the then and the now. Thoughts
prelude to other thoughts of 
thoughts emerging to 
many thoughts.
Consulting and
the death
and birth
of us; is thy
to shed the 
events upon the
ground transformed
from a dream out of a
dream to this dream only of us?
A coherent argument it is, that the
memories back on yesterday brought us 
here today...But, when thy and thou bodies
meet and descend upon each accreting to the singular; occupancy
quickly overcomes vacancy leading the thoughts of many thoughts effaced.
(Sigh)...Thy and Thou love bolsters all the more today than back on yesterday.

Pace, G


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  1. Date: 6/9/2014 7:46:00 AM
    Another wonderful gem from your pen! Kindest regards.

  1. Date: 6/23/2013 2:35:00 AM
    very well done on this free verse ,,,,, I thank you for reading my Pitch Perfect Dreams. you have a great day ;}

  1. Date: 3/30/2013 9:34:00 AM
    How on earth did I ever pass by this one?! You are such a unique poet, the works of yours that I have read thus far have blown me away and reeeally stood out to me. You rock! Adding this to my favorites. :)

  1. Date: 3/4/2013 6:17:00 PM
    WOW.............A coherent argument it is, that the memories back on yesterday brought us here today.........That line alone tells an entire story........

  1. Date: 2/27/2013 2:09:00 PM
    I enjoyed your verse this afternoon. Light & Love

  1. Date: 2/24/2013 6:38:00 AM
    Wow excellent metaphoric poem poet. Very good poetry

  1. Date: 2/23/2013 7:46:00 AM
    Pace, a superb write and very clever, well done...David

  1. Date: 2/20/2013 11:50:00 AM

  1. Date: 2/4/2013 3:08:00 PM
    wonderful flowing poetry, with this Pace...

  1. Date: 2/2/2013 2:35:00 PM
    This is the bomb I love this! Interesting title and amazing presentation of a satisfactory chapter of romantically pleasant thoughts, memories and outcomes. It feels good reading this and it felt even better to read it again <3

  1. Date: 2/2/2013 7:03:00 AM
    keep going Super Ink,great write,love it

  1. Date: 2/1/2013 11:14:00 AM
    Wow, what a creative piece! I really enjoyed this one.

  1. Date: 1/31/2013 6:50:00 AM
    I love the play on words, this piece just rolls off the tongue! and I love the title, Good piece! -Beastboy

  1. Date: 1/28/2013 3:04:00 PM
    Very wonderful write, love Elizabeth

  1. Date: 1/23/2013 9:44:00 PM
    Simply beautiful. The best poems are ones that take you to a next place in your mind. Yours did that for me.

  1. Date: 1/22/2013 10:59:00 AM
    Love this poem...skat

  1. Date: 1/19/2013 6:30:00 PM
    Nicely done, again I love the structure and that it still flows so smoothly...D

  1. Date: 12/28/2012 6:10:00 AM
    Every day we honor our heritage by our actions...nice, Pace! jimbo

  1. Date: 12/27/2012 5:50:00 PM
    This is a beautiful write with a great flow. Thanks for sharing with us. Lucilla

  1. Date: 12/25/2012 5:24:00 PM
    Thoughts that are deep can lead to great insights..I hope that you came up with some that answered your questions..I like the idea that God is there when we are knitted together in our mother's womb and that He is in charge of the knitting..Great work that you have penned...Sara