Revealing To Me

Laying down on my back I look straight up Sky’s filled with small dots and the moon’s a cup Specks are bright with a very brilliant white They are awesome to see, a gorgeous sight The stars bring an aura to me with life No problems in the world I see, no strife I relax when the dots are before me Superior is their glow, completely As I lay on the ground I do notice This sky harbors peace within its darkness For the moon and the stars sure envelope The unmoving specks of light develop The stars move me in my heart seeing true Revealing to me how much I love you
Russell Sivey

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 3/13/2013 9:31:00 AM
Very well said....and reminds me that should I lay down I may never get up....Good One....Thanks
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Date: 3/10/2013 1:33:00 PM
Enjoyed reading this one today..I am glad that I chose this one..I went outback for a minute last night to see if there were any stars and I did not see one..I guess that it was a little cloudy..Thanks for stopping by..Yes, the person who was saying that they didn't need God really did not realize what they was saying..Sara
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Date: 3/10/2013 8:17:00 AM
'The sky harbors peace within the darkness' I love the feeling to this line and the last line is wonderful. Beautifully written. Warm Smiles, Connie
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Date: 3/10/2013 12:16:00 AM
I'm infatuated with the imagery..dear Russell... love the vision of a fresh star cup.... before the night drops love dust into your eyes... I must say, the stars you are viewing, come with heartfelt loving power. I'm glad to read a poem about the stars revealing true motions inside u...always, your adoring fan....Linda
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