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Repost Chocolate-Trochee

Rich chocolate 'pon my thin lips.
On taste buds twang sits
Minute; lifetime on big hips.
Now clothes don't fit

To a diet must commit
Carrots celery dip
Peanut chocolate dip permit
My pants can now zip

Having bigger problem now than ever....Ha!!LOL

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  1. Date: 10/23/2013 10:07:00 PM
    How sweet it is to put upon the lips. How bitter it is to work off. I can so identify with this. Great poem!

  1. Date: 10/12/2013 8:19:00 PM
    A very "sweet" poem, Sara, I enjoyed every morsel of it! I love chocolate, too, so I know how you feel. I have been there many times before! :) Great work!...Thank you for the kind comments!

  1. Date: 10/5/2013 11:03:00 PM
    Hi Sara; It's not easy to give up something you like - like chocolate cake. I myself have never been on a diet. I don't like them. Enjoy life and be happy.... Lucilla

  1. Date: 10/3/2013 5:51:00 AM
    - Yes, dear Sara I can relate this....:)))) - well done ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 10/3/2013 3:32:00 AM
    :))))))) This is very timely excellent poem for me now that I'm committed to have diet by completely avoiding choco if possible (no diabetes just annoying fats on hips lol). This is a very delightful poem to read making me wear more smiles on my face this afternoon. Thank you so much my dear friend Sara. Have a great day! love much & biggest hugs, Leonora

  1. Date: 10/2/2013 5:54:00 PM
    Sara, I had a 7/5 Trochee contest a long long time ago. Was this one used in that? Just curious. It sure is a fun poem

  1. Date: 10/2/2013 5:50:00 PM
    Sara, sounds good to me.. the whole diet thing.. LOL... love this witty write.. always~ Linda

  1. Date: 10/2/2013 2:01:00 PM
    Ha-ha-he-he-ha-ha....To heck with wide hips, Sara...Pig out!!...I'm working on a little tool shed myself (VERY little)...Oh waiter, I'll have a slice of cake for dessert (hold the cake please) Why is it that everything good for you tastes bad and everything bad for you taste good? Enjoyed this to the max - Tim

  1. Date: 10/2/2013 1:03:00 PM
    Oh My How I can relate. Glad your pants can zip..I am a big fan of elastic. lol. BG

  1. Date: 10/2/2013 9:23:00 AM
    This is such a clever little write my friend! I really enjoyed reading this amazing poem this morning! What a powerful incentive this piece really is Sara! Great Work!!

  1. Date: 10/2/2013 7:42:00 AM
    heelarious, sara... who can resist chocolates?... you had me in stitches; knock-out piece!..:) huggs

  1. Date: 10/2/2013 6:59:00 AM
    Hi Sara, An entertaining and yet good write with humor.. Ken

  1. Date: 10/2/2013 6:58:00 AM
    Haha. Thanks for the chuckle this morning, Sara. I struggle with my weight and have trouble sticking to diets, so I totally related. Fun write! :)