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Repeated Thoughts

I do not know Know not do I Cry my in snow Snow in my cry Try hard to grow Grow hard to try Fly wings broken Broken wings fly Lies just are lies Lies are just lies Cries fall grey skies Skies grey fall cries Spy's in disguise Disguise in spy's Prize the on eyes Eyes on the prize

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Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 12/13/2011 1:06:00 PM

This one from you is really different Johnny. Amazing that you have crafted this that makes sense with a great message backwards or forward. I especially love the last two lines. Creative to say the least - luv, Lizzie

Kirby Magee-Dittberner

Date: 12/9/2011 12:49:00 PM

My favourite is "Lies just are lies...". I can extract some meaning out of it. Thank you for writing a thought provoking poem like this. I'd forgotten to read any of yours since "I am not a ghost," one of my favourites on Poetry Soup. -KMD

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/9/2011 10:46:00 AM

Thank you for sharing your writing with us today Johnny. Love, Carol